RyanMartinec
Say, is your splatoon story a harem
S-SEVEN7
S-SEVEN7
this message may be offensive
as i'm writing to ask for feedback about the story criteria . it's something that i'm really passionate about . and i really want to see if it's worth sharing out . but with the lack of response i'm slowly starting to regret doing so , as i feel that nobody is really interested in reading it . not that i blame anyone , who would want to spend his time reading a nonsensical fanfic that has so many things happening at once . maybe my dumbass would've known better than to waist people's time creating literal garbage known as criteria..
EduarDoElHeroe
@ S-SEVEN7 Hi, long time no talk... I wanted to tell you, I know I haven't been reading (actually, anything in general, as I've been a little down to this app). However, I really get your feelings, because I also have a story that I'm really passionate about but hasn't been well-received. You see, at least me, I haven't ever got any of the popularity of yours. I invite you to follow what your heart says: if you enjoy just writing, do it, or if you enjoy being read, etc.
S-SEVEN7
happy new year everyone !
S-SEVEN7
so 'major characters' parts have been updated with relationships statues (or at least for those that'll matter for the story anyway) .once again (and i'm sorry for being annoying) all i'm asking is feedback on either here or in the comment section of each part/chapter of the book .
S-SEVEN7
the story 'criteria' opening/introduction chapter 'edge of the world' has been re-released . i would love for those who mostly read my splatoon book to go and try reading it and give feed back and thoughts on it . i would also love for you all to read the 'major characters' parts and give your feedback on those as well .
S-SEVEN7
marry christmas to you all beautiful people !
S-SEVEN7
i would like to know the exact thoughts on the chapter "mountain run" . aside from wanting feedback on how it performed , i guess i just want to hear that i'm doing good . cause believe it or not , i read many fanfic , and many authors pointed out that it's the worst chapter they made so far . and i can't deny that i feel the same way as well .
so please , let me know the exact thoughts in the replies
S-SEVEN7
@SourceFreak any future predictions that might involve what happens in this chapter ? because while i won't reveal anything except that things will reach it's climax in the end of act three . which can be predicted by using the order of dates that the girls agreed on
SourceFreak
The whole Race with Alex and the Silver Squid Can be explained by one Word: Intense.
The thought of Racing down a Mountain area with nothing but your headlights is a scary Concept, and the Chapter really took advantage of it‘s Setting. I was expecting two outcomes. One where Alex lost right before the end, and it would start some new conflict in a Future Chapter, of the Moment when Alex caused his Opponent to lose Control and start fumbling down the Mountain. I was expecting for him to die in that Moment, which would have been another accidental death from him, which could have consequences when one of the spectators revealed it to the puplic as a way of revenge.
S-SEVEN7
updated 'a date with callie' chapter with some lore on callie at the end of her date with alex . feel free to check it out if you want
S-SEVEN7
a new world a new life's next chapter "mountain run" is out ! finally after 8 F-ing months ! god why did it take so long ? anyway go read as i start writing the next one .
S-SEVEN7
Sorry for taking do long on this new chapter of a new world a new life . The next chapter has reached more than 10000 words , which is way passed my supposed writing limit of 7000 to 9000 words . And i'm still not finished . I'm in the middle of writing the last part of this chapter before finally releasing it . Hopefully soon cause i'm tired of taking a while to write something .
S-SEVEN7
@surgeon1800 yeah....sure *me who's planning on introducing them in the third and final book*
