S-SEVEN7
i would like to know the exact thoughts on the chapter "mountain run" . aside from wanting feedback on how it performed , i guess i just want to hear that i'm doing good . cause believe it or not , i read many fanfic , and many authors pointed out that it's the worst chapter they made so far . and i can't deny that i feel the same way as well . so please , let me know the exact thoughts in the replies
S-SEVEN7
@SourceFreak any future predictions that might involve what happens in this chapter ? because while i won't reveal anything except that things will reach it's climax in the end of act three . which can be predicted by using the order of dates that the girls agreed on
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SourceFreak
The whole Race with Alex and the Silver Squid Can be explained by one Word: Intense. The thought of Racing down a Mountain area with nothing but your headlights is a scary Concept, and the Chapter really took advantage of it‘s Setting. I was expecting two outcomes. One where Alex lost right before the end, and it would start some new conflict in a Future Chapter, of the Moment when Alex caused his Opponent to lose Control and start fumbling down the Mountain. I was expecting for him to die in that Moment, which would have been another accidental death from him, which could have consequences when one of the spectators revealed it to the puplic as a way of revenge.
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