S-SEVEN7

i would like to know the exact thoughts on the chapter "mountain run" . aside from wanting feedback on how it performed , i guess i just want to hear that i'm doing good . cause believe it or not , i read many fanfic , and many authors pointed out that it's the worst chapter they made so far . and i can't deny that i feel the same way as well .
          	so please , let me know the exact thoughts in the replies

S-SEVEN7

@SourceFreak any future predictions that might involve what happens in this chapter ?
          	  because while i won't reveal anything except that things will reach it's climax in the end of act three . which can be predicted by using the order of dates that the girls agreed on
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SourceFreak

The whole Race with Alex and the Silver Squid Can be explained by one Word: Intense.
          	  
          	  The thought of Racing down a Mountain area with nothing but your headlights is a scary Concept, and the Chapter really took advantage of it‘s Setting. I was expecting two outcomes. One where Alex lost right before the end, and it would start some new conflict in a Future Chapter, of the Moment when Alex caused his Opponent to lose Control and start fumbling down the Mountain. I was expecting for him to die in that Moment, which would have been another accidental death from him, which could have consequences when one of the spectators revealed it to the puplic as a way of revenge.
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S-SEVEN7

i would like to know the exact thoughts on the chapter "mountain run" . aside from wanting feedback on how it performed , i guess i just want to hear that i'm doing good . cause believe it or not , i read many fanfic , and many authors pointed out that it's the worst chapter they made so far . and i can't deny that i feel the same way as well .
          so please , let me know the exact thoughts in the replies

S-SEVEN7

@SourceFreak any future predictions that might involve what happens in this chapter ?
            because while i won't reveal anything except that things will reach it's climax in the end of act three . which can be predicted by using the order of dates that the girls agreed on
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SourceFreak

The whole Race with Alex and the Silver Squid Can be explained by one Word: Intense.
            
            The thought of Racing down a Mountain area with nothing but your headlights is a scary Concept, and the Chapter really took advantage of it‘s Setting. I was expecting two outcomes. One where Alex lost right before the end, and it would start some new conflict in a Future Chapter, of the Moment when Alex caused his Opponent to lose Control and start fumbling down the Mountain. I was expecting for him to die in that Moment, which would have been another accidental death from him, which could have consequences when one of the spectators revealed it to the puplic as a way of revenge.
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S-SEVEN7

Sorry for taking do long on this new chapter of a new world a new life . The next chapter has reached more than 10000 words , which is way passed my supposed writing limit of 7000 to 9000 words . And i'm still not finished . I'm in the middle of writing the last part of this chapter before finally releasing it . Hopefully soon cause i'm tired of taking a while to write something .

S-SEVEN7

@surgeon1800 yeah....sure 
            *me who's planning on introducing them in the third and final book*
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surgeon1800

@S-SEVEN7 I can wait to see Alex meet deep cut now your story actually very good.
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Osteo-X

@S-SEVEN7 Just take a break, I can wait.
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S-SEVEN7

should i make a 'pokemon x male reader (insert)' story ?

SourceFreak

@S-SEVEN7 stuff like having the main character have a full team of very strong Pokemon that make the story have barely any high stakes, since you can already tell who is winning before it even starts. Having a few weaker mon would make it a bit more interesting.
            
            
            Speaking of Pokemon, most stories I read also have a moment where the character stumbles upon a Pokemon that was abused and abandoned by their trainer, and the conflict gets its conclusion in the same chapter. Either don’t do this at all, or give it a good build up for a better pay off sometime later in the story.
            
            
            I don’t know if you plan on giving the main character a harem, but if so, just limit it to the region the story takes place in. 
            
            At the end, this is still your story and it’s all up to you how you write it, but I hope this comment helped you about certain things to look out for.
            
            
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SourceFreak

@S-SEVEN7 sure. Just make sure to avoid any "Pokemon x reader" cliches.
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S-SEVEN7

the book 'criteria' chapters (edge of the world / a fallen reunion part 1) have been removed . 
          
          'edge of the world' was removed because the characters (the blacklist) felt like they weren't introduced properly . while nothing will be edited of what was already written , a lot more would be added like action to show how they fight and their dynamic .
          
          the only reason 'a fallen reunion part 1' was removed is because it wouldn't make sense for those who decide to try the book for the first time , and i didn't want to leave a negative first impression for my most ambitious book .
          
          that's all . thanks for reading this and for all the support . sorry for the lack of activeness , busy with my job and other life related stuff .
          
          that's all , s7 out .

S-SEVEN7

chapter 'waking up' from 'a new world a new life' has been remastered and improved heavily . please consider re-reading it and giving your thoughts in the comments .

S-SEVEN7

still alive b*tch ! you ?
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S-SEVEN7

announcement : 
          
          first , i want to say a big thank you to everyone that has supported me from my very begining . i just wanna let you know , that you guys are an incredible audience and everything hazbin a great thanks to the positive feedback and constructive criticism . 
          
          but i need to address that while i do indeed enjoy working on my splatoon and original story , i do feel a creativity burnout when it comes to making those books , to the point that somedays i only make a phrase worth of progress . 
          
          and while i will continue them (no need to worry) i do infact want to make issue an announcement . that i will be making a third book (another fanficton of a different franchise known in the internet) because i just have so many ideas and i would love to share them with you all to help me combat this burnout .
          
          for some of you , this would like a helluva dumb idea , since i still have other unfinished books . (even a friend of mine here told me the same) but i have something called ADHD . i basically loose interest in something , so my mind focuses instantly on something else entirely to help deal with this boredroom . 
          
          once again , i will focuse on all stories and i won't cancel any of them . as i know the feeling of enjoying something , only to find out it's been cancelled and are unable to know how it'll end . so don't worry , a new world a new life (and it's 2 sequels that follows it , and a few but very short prequel books for each of the two) , the street of underground , and this new book will all be complete . 
          
          that's all for now .
          
          s7 , out .