S-slumber

wattpad messed up my book cover quality so bad man :( also why did the og qti book 1 chapter 24 lowkey eat

S-slumber

just had the craziest test ever bro two people told me they got decimals and i got fractions.

S-slumber

@xFlowPeax I'M NEVER DOING THAT AGAIN I SWEAR BRO TRAUMATIZING EXPERIENCE
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xFlowPeax

@S-slumber that's why I stopped asking about people's answers after a test
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S-slumber

Chapters for secrets of the sea, qti, and romance 101 posted!!

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@Raemon_Shirogami this announcement was for when I published chapter 4 and while writing on mobile I accidentally pressed publish on chapter 5 ^^; so if what you can't see is chapter 5, don't worry since it'll be up and edited by tomorrow :)
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Raemon_Shirogami

˚₊· ͟͟͞͞➳❥ │❝@S-slumber❞ │Hi lovely!! did you delete the chapter for Romance 101? I'm not seeing it anymore...(  •̀ - •́  )
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S-slumber

NOOOOO ONE TOLD ME PROOFREADING ON WORD WAS THIS MUCH EASIER??? MIGHT AS WELL TAKE ADVANTAGE OF MY SCHOOL'S FREE OFFICE ACOUNT WTH

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it really is?? i didn't expect much because i only use word for school work in french but i was pleasantly surprised ^^
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Raemon_Shirogami

˚₊· ͟͟͞͞➳❥ │❝@S-slumber❞ │ LOL, its the same with docs ngl but I've used word once for my writing and it was pretty good ngl (˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧
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S-slumber

I WAS PULLING FOR LILIA'S DORM SSR WDYM I GOT SEBEK'S??????? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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DON'T WORRY I'M ACTUALLY COOKING SMTH UP I FINALLY GOT A LAPTOP AND I WILL BRO I'M SO MAD I HATE SEBEK SO MUCH AHHHHHHHHHHH
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xFlowPeax

@S-slumber WHAT (don't forget about us pookie) CLOCK THAT B SEBEK
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Raemon_Shirogami

Hello darling, how ya doing??
          
          Just wanting to ask if it's  alright if you could critique a story of mine? It's a work in progress and it's just random stories that I somehow pick up from songs I listen to~
          
          The book itself is called "SONGRIES", no pressure or anything, I just wanted a few things that I'm not quite seeing to be pointed out so I can correct them in the future.
          
          I absolutely adore your way of writing and describing the emotions the person is feeling at the moment. Your doing a great job!

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@S-slumber | | Thank you so much for reading!! I AM SO SORRY FOR RESPONDING LATE I DIDNT SEE A NOTIFICATION FOR THIS AT ALL....
            
            and thank you so much for the advice, I'll re-read it and check over it again just for good measure, thank you so much once again!!! <3
            
            Have a great day also!!!~ <3
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S-slumber

@Raemon_Shirogami Okay!! i finished reading!!! sorry it took a while i lowkey postponed it for a while and before i knew it exams were up and i had to make time for that :(
            
            First of all, i think i should say that i love the concept? Of course bringing what you think when you hear a song to life could be done anytime but writing it out with proper structure where it makes sense could be a challenge. Kudos to you for that!!
            
            But for the general story, i actually have no complaints! I'm sort of bad at constructive criticism, so i'm sorry if it doesn't help you much ^^; the only thing i would tell you to do would be try re-reading it a few times
            
            I'm not sure if it's for everyone, but for me at least whenever i read over something at least once or twice i find better ways to write the sentences so i think it would be nice if you gave it a try! Also, try watching out for small grammar and conjugation mistakes here and there ^^
            
            Aside from that i really don't see anything wrong so i hope you have a good day!!
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Raemon_Shirogami

Oh my goodness, thank you so much!!! Take all the time you need lovely <3
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potatopopato

hello, hru!!
          
          wanted to ask a quick question since im trying to start writing but theres still some stuff i need to get the hang of, would it be alright you say how you make your covers? i think theyre really pretty and im trying to make some but the process is js rly confusing. u dont need to say anything if you dont want to tho!
          
          off topic but im actually in love with your nuevillette fic good luck writing, and please take care of yourself:)

S-slumber

@potatopopato glad i could be of any help ^^ and i'll be sure to try out that method you reccomended!!
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potatopopato

@S-slumber tysm! that actually clears up a lot of stuff ive been confused abt so it helped a lot.
            dw abt seeing it just now since i also saw it quite late, ty for the offer tho and ill be sure to ask if smths unclear.
            
            for your writers block maybe you can read other books abt the characters youre writing for? idk if itll work but it always helps me, have fun and i hope u get over your writers block soon.^^
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S-slumber

@potatopopato I didn't get the notification for this until rn i'm so sorry :( but of course I could try to explain!!
            
            I make my covers on canva since they have the measurements for Wattpad book covers. then I find art of the character I want to make the book about, and a smaller cuter thing that complements them. it's usually a chibi version of them for me ^^
            
            I usually have a set of exactly what I use to decorate my covers, such as the page folded corner transparent PNG or the ripped paper png, but I think it would be nice if you take the liberty to explore how you want to personalize your cover :)
            
            For text, I have the name of the character, a word related to the book and its definition, of course the title that's usually separated in two text boxes, and I also a sneak not-so-subtle watermark in the folded page PNG.
            
            I think it would be best if almost all of your measurements match up when it comes to the cover, like for the small object added to the cover and the text too. also, try your best to find a tint that accentuates the art or any of the component, but doesn't overwhelm any of them. you could lower the vibrancy of the tint in this case
            
            I think I covered the main points with this and I'm not sure if the explanation was very clear ^^; but nonetheless I hope it helped!!
            
            I really needed the good luck writing I've had a crazy writer's block too lmao and I hope you also take care of yourself. Good luck writing and you can ask me any question you'd like if you ever need! I'll do my best to help!
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