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hey guys!!! sorry authors pls delete if bot allowed but i was wondering if you would take the time to read my ongoing book and give me some advice. It’s my first time writing a book like this and i’ve worked very hard on it. I’ll attach the blurb and the story - much appreciated!! 
          
          FLORENCE AND I 
          written by may taylor 2025
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405001354?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=maytaylorsb0oks
          

Hello!
          
          Do you mind checking out my story?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406242251?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Tiny_Blue_Guy

" You took my bullet " Ava mumbles with wide eyes and lips full of pallor. 
          
          " I don't like to owe anything. Just evened the score " Roccon softly says with a chuckle as their sights lock for a second.
          
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          The novel " Bulletproof Couple " is now available on Wattpad! 
          
          Genres:
          
          - Teen Fiction 
          - Humor 
          - Romance
          - Action
          - Thriller
          
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          HOPE YOU VISIT IT !
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392254549?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis