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GrapeJuice1011

Hey, I just wanna say I love your Shiloh and bro story. If you need any help/ideas for future episodes, let me know. I do have one suggestion though. When you do dress to impress, have both Shiloh and Jess compete. Maybe when they in their first time in the black outfit, Jess can say to the boys “I hate you guys so much! You know how I feel about dressing up. Didn’t Mario teach you anything about me?”

GrapeJuice1011

I got more ideas if you need them. Maybe when you do the zombie caves, instead of gala, have Tara be affected as the Zombie Alpha. That way, not only does she understand what Jess has been going through, but also Jess feels like this is her worst nightmare coming true to see her big sister being the alpha. What do you think?
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Yes, I love this idea!  I am definitely planning to have her compete! Thank you for sharing!
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