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I published chapter 87 of EBI ❤️

Astxrism_24
I was consumed with my own worries i forgot to talk about the chapter (also sorry if my paragraph is everywhere) the chapter was amazingg, I can not describe in few words how beautifully the story had captured the essence of guilt and grieve not to mention the role of our fav Peddanna to lighten the mood from the intense scene. thankyou wonderful author for providing us with this beautiful story

butterflystary
To our lovely author- You really don't know how good your words are to touch our inner soul. Your last chapter really did a good job leaving an impact, i vividly remember how I was in the middle of the road, since i live in Kolkata and durga puja was going on, I was out for pandal hopping and then while taking a bit of rest, I read that chapter and my mind was completely blank for the rest of the day with its words echoing in my mind "and I gave in and gave her what she desired”. That really did leave a deep impact on me. And today's chapter, chap-87, I guess this was really needed, the way you described those complex emotions, tbh i don't hate deva anymore, yeah I still don't like him but I do not hate him either, because I person who tries to reach perfection gets lost at times when they are truly made to believe that they are a failure. So yeah while I don't like deva anymore, I do sympathize with him that he is going to lose so many things because of his guilt overpowering everything. And last, I must say, the way you express these complex deep emotions , it's unexplainable in a beautiful and good way. And the last chapter really has put my mind at ease now , I'm grateful for that, thank you so much! You are one of the best authors i know! You should really publish these books in physical form, they will rock! Bye bye, One of your readers ♡

SANAMIKA_WRITES
I published chapter 87 of EBI ❤️

hellohi2pp2
I am searching for story with this plot, I have seen some reel but couldn't find it now ML and FML familes are rival families but their respective siblings run away and get married and have a baby. But they die in an accident and ML and FML try to find the culprit while taking care of the baby Does anyone know such story?? Please help me find this

Iruag18
As we already knew that he cheated so I actually did not got invested in cheaters story or I used to skip his part but I did a mistake by getting attached with Indus character and that's why it's hurting more and more watching how she chose him as he showed respect for a women's thaught her concern she felt respected and at the end he gave the biggest betrayal to her. In this story not all ml were like EBL so supportive or they were kind of on the edge of orthodox thinking but all those women had only one thing for which they let go of other things and that was there husbands love, loyalty and devotion. Being a queen Indu did not get that simple thing as well so it hurts. I find this story so intrested as this story showed how all the laws formed or introduced in EBL was necessary. Plot for EBI was more on outside of palace so it showed how the actual things were. I can say that general dheera did the parenting and training of both nanda and Adi so they could never do same mistakes as them. Now I know why nanda was so strict and used get angry whenever adi used to break security protocols and used to sneek out.

__Hebe_
Happy Vijayadashami Sana Di!!!

AK__2020
It’s been four days since I read that part and it’s still baffling me. First time I’ve ever commented this much on a book, never negative for a character. That last line… it made me a nervous wreck. He used to look at couples doing rituals, wishing he could have that, always supporting others, then finally he got that love, someone who accepted him with his past. But then… just a few words, and he lost it. He initiated it—that broke me. His lotus's face, her thoughts, never crossed his mind. He said he would never take a second wife, never a concubine. Then how did he suddenly become the kind of man who could do a one-night thing? He’s a king, a soldier, a diplomat—how could he not handle that? She was manipulating him, but still, he should’ve been smarter. Even if as a king it was duty, he should’ve remembered his vow. Knocking her out, tying her hands, even that would’ve been better. At least it would only affect her for a while, save the child, later Avantika too, but his choice ruined so many lives—even his kids suffered. His POV showed guilt and turbulence, but still—it was his choice. If he truly loved his wife, he couldn’t have done this. He had accepted her, confessed guilt, she chose him. They’d been married a year, trying for a baby, and then he just forgot her—for someone else’s desire. Your other characters had flaws but stood by their partners and grew with them. And now him… it feels so wrong. I appreciate your writing. Part of me dreads what comes next, but I want to read about Dheera and Yashu, their kids and everything. It’s really going to be disturbing for a while.

thepearl_diver
Ever since u updated the chapter this has been in my mind. The reader were— actually are frustrated with the revelation its just cause deva's character felt too smart to be manipulated THIS easily. And to say and believ he loved indu beyond death after HE initiated the kiss is just.. idk. Yes he was under a lot of guilt and moral battle with himself but if this is all it took him to cheat on his wife—his love and his evrything apparantely just dosent sit right. His character was never protrayed like that. Humans are complex and they do make mistakes ik but this cheating on someone. Its a choice. He chose it. So justifying his character would be senseless. BUT didi the frustration in on DEVA the Character not you. And uk i felt it was so smart to lock this twist,where every reader is in a moral battle. And is debating on his pov. Your writing—its loved,cherished and will always be pls pls pls dont take the comments as a personal hit and feel bad abt it WE LOVE UR WORLD. And at the end if the story dosent make the readers debate amongst each other kya khaak twist h lol. So we love u and ur book.You not saying a word since the release just worried me. Like aapne personally toh kuch nhi liya? Anyway, Come back fast and bring us ur new pov to the twist. ~Xoxo,a professional chameleon.

Oh_Madhu
@thepearl_diver I love this, no other words just how everyone’s really thinking about it retrospectively and also for reassuring and caring for our dear akka☺️
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Starry_wispers09
The most sad part is he initiated the kiss part never one the thought of his wife came in his mind he not for once thought about his wife he initiated like seriously he initiated nd you claim to love your wife I am crying sice i read this chapter it broke my heart