Thanks
But I think I can write it a bit better, I kinda rushed it so it doesn't really show how I can write,.....
So for those reasons (and the fact that I accidentally started taking notes on what could happen in the wrong book)
I'm going to rewrite it in the year after,... were gonna get to see Percy yell at Umbridge!!!
I'm going to post a message later today or tommorow morning about what's going to happen
Thanks again and have a wonderfully amazing day!