SHMU3L

I hope no one hates Sasuke toooo much in TDRHOM……… i mean, the hate will be there cus i also hate him sometimes as i write him from Sakura and Shikamaru’s POV (especially Shikamaru’s) but …… I hope there’s forgiveness from u guys LOL

SpoiledBratt0

@SHMU3L hahahahaha it’s okkk the possessive character suits hin 
          	  I literally can’t wait to read the story 
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JessKnitz

LOLLLLL
          	  
          	  This gives me motivation to start reading sooner & find out why you say that xD
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SHMU3L

I hope no one hates Sasuke toooo much in TDRHOM……… i mean, the hate will be there cus i also hate him sometimes as i write him from Sakura and Shikamaru’s POV (especially Shikamaru’s) but …… I hope there’s forgiveness from u guys LOL

SpoiledBratt0

@SHMU3L hahahahaha it’s okkk the possessive character suits hin 
            I literally can’t wait to read the story 
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JessKnitz

LOLLLLL
            
            This gives me motivation to start reading sooner & find out why you say that xD
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SHMU3L

I was writing my TDRHOM the other day and my sister read a little bit of it…….. she said it was good, but people were going to think I used chatgbt because of the dashes that I use “—“ 
          
          I have now learned that that’s a tell because that app uses them often? 
          
          But I started using dashes after reading SJM ACOTAR and noticing how she uses them and how much sense they make to either emphasize something or make a quick pause or other things…… also, I write my stories, like actually write them down in my iPad. I use Element Note and write in there with my Apple pen and when I finish a chapter I type it out and correct a few things before my final drafts. 
          
          But now I feel weird bc what if I do all this work and people assume that? The first story I wrote on here (Forever Mine) was 4/5 years ago…. I think I’ve gotten a little better at writing bc that last one was, well, crazy since the POVs are everywhere and I over explain and couldnt really get it to flow easily. I know my readers liked it bc they made it make sense and understood what I was trying to say/go about it, which I love them for! But…. Am I just overthinking this? Should I rewrite it and remove the dashes? Idk what to do :(

SHMU3L

@sunshinencherris @jessknitz @spoiledbratt0 Thank you guys! That makes me feel so much better. I kept rereading old chapters, unsure :( this means a lot!!!
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SpoiledBratt0

Nooo its ok !! you can  keep them . As long as the story comes together nicely ,the dashes will only be a noce touch to it
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SHMU3L

I’m sorry I’ve been letting y’all down lately. I do have a big girl job now so there’s not a lot of time. I’m also not the best writer, given that all I’ve been taught is the standard HS English class everyone has to take, so I overthink everything I write. 
          
          I do write as much as I can every day (mostly for TDRHOM for now) but that’s not a lot of time. It takes a while to get stories done, even when you’re all in. 
          
          TY IF YOU’VE BEEN HERE
          TY FOR THE READING 
          TY FOR THE LIKES
          TY FOR THE COMMENTS
          TY ALL ILY 
          
          I hope I don’t lose any of you before they’re all done.
          
          (See other post to get the first part of this update)

sakurauchiha218

@SHMU3L take your time 
            We'll be waiting for you
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JessKnitz

❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨
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BestGirlHinata

@SHMU3L girl the only reason I still have a wattpad is for u, don't be hard on your writing its genuinely really good. Take all the time you need, remember that you're writing genuinely good storys with amazing plots for no money in your free time and sharing them with a buncha Internet people. Put yourself first- it'd be a super bummer if we found out you had practically killed urself for a fic :c I waited for a fic to update for 8 years at one point I think after that I can wait any amount of time!!! My patience has no bounds 
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SHMU3L

FOREVER MINE — Being heavily edited. I wrote it yearsss & the writing is sooo bad. The POVs are everywhere & it’s just no. More might be added to the story. (Not a priority tho)
          
          TDRHOM — I am working on this one the most. It started as a sad one-shot that’ll make readers come up w their own assumptions, but then I just started writing. I don’t plan to post until I finish it all or at least more than half. 
          
          KNOW BETTER — High school AU. I did kind of lose interest for a while, but I do plan on returning to it and getting it done. (Somewhat priority) (I do already know how it’ll end)
          
          ALL I HAVE LEFT — This was the first ever fic I’ve done & the writing was HORRIBLE. It’s an interesting story & do plan on finishing it, but if for whatever reason I don’t, I do plan on asking another SASUSAKU writer if they’d might want to take it for themselves. I’ll give them the ideas I have, but they’ll string it all together however they’d like (still haven’t decided tho, either way you all WILL get this story
          
          (See other post for the second part of this update)

JessKnitz

❤️❤️❤️
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MariVikka

@SHMU3L I’ve just finished the “FOREVER MINE” SASUSAKU story✨♥️ (^_^)  I’ve cried for the whole book 1 until quarter of book 2:( most especially SASUKE’S POV, I feel his heartache and pain for sakura :’( Your writing style is so unique and captivating(*~*)✨♥️ This story evokes so much emotions, but honestly I love it and i add it on my list♥️ hope you write more of sasusaku story✨♥️ Looking forward for Modern Au fanfic♥️♥️♥️ thanks author-san 

roughlov3sa

I started to read it from your recommendation. I finished the first part in one day. (This might be the reason why I didn’t publish today). But oh my … I was not ready for this emotional rollercoaster and my heart ache so much. I hope second part will resolve these feelings! 
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