Hi Author,
I hope you're doing well. I'm currently reading THE BET and I've noticed a few minor plot errors and it is very confusing. Surely anyone would ignore grammatical mistakes but plot errors make it confusing and let's the interest down to read the story further.
Otherwise the major part is interesting and I hope you read the story again to fix the errors.
I don't mean to be rude and if I've hurt you in any way, I apologise. Have a great day! 🩷