SJKOCH22

Hey everyone!!!! BIG NEWS!!!! First off, a huge apology to all of you for my hiatus that took from writing.  Some of you already know this, but for those of you who don't, I had an honest-to-God literary agent who had requested my entire mauscript.  She eneded up rejecting it, but did had some feedback and advise on changes I should make, so I've been spending a lot of time working on critiques for The Selected, two of which I published.  I changed the ending to Chapter Nineteen which has been updated, and I almost changed all of Chapter Twenty.  None of the changes will impact book two, which I hope to get back to soon, but here's the BIG NEWS!!!!  Due to popular demand and a new idea for the story line, SAGE and ASHER get together in the last chapter!!!!  (Full on make-out scene lol, for everyone who requested it.  Haha... enjoy!)  As always, thanks a million to all of you, and PLEASE let me know what you think in the comments.  Feedback really is vital, without it, there wouldn't be a new love scene between SAGE and ASHER!

SJKOCH22

Hey everyone!!!! BIG NEWS!!!! First off, a huge apology to all of you for my hiatus that took from writing.  Some of you already know this, but for those of you who don't, I had an honest-to-God literary agent who had requested my entire mauscript.  She eneded up rejecting it, but did had some feedback and advise on changes I should make, so I've been spending a lot of time working on critiques for The Selected, two of which I published.  I changed the ending to Chapter Nineteen which has been updated, and I almost changed all of Chapter Twenty.  None of the changes will impact book two, which I hope to get back to soon, but here's the BIG NEWS!!!!  Due to popular demand and a new idea for the story line, SAGE and ASHER get together in the last chapter!!!!  (Full on make-out scene lol, for everyone who requested it.  Haha... enjoy!)  As always, thanks a million to all of you, and PLEASE let me know what you think in the comments.  Feedback really is vital, without it, there wouldn't be a new love scene between SAGE and ASHER!

Horcrux3

I'm dying here waiting for another update! I have to know what happens next!

SJKOCH22

@KellyWeaver3 thanks!!!  The chapter is half done.  Hoping to post tonight. (Probably really late tonight). Lol
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Horcrux3

How exciting! I can't wait!
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SJKOCH22

@KellyWeaver3 Hey, sorry it's been so long.  I took a small hiatus to work on some edits for book one.  I had a Lit agent looking at my full manuscript for book one.  I'm still doing some of the edits that she suggested, but I'll try my absolute hardest to get an update in this week.  Thanks so much for your support and patients.  I know it's been forever!
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SJKOCH22

Hey everyone!!!  The end of Chapter Ten is up!!!  I added almost ten pages to the chapter.  I know it's been a while.  I hope you all enjoy.  I'm working on Chapter Eleven now.  Hint!!!!: Trial One actually happens in Chapter Eleven so pay close attention to chapter ten.  I'm curious to see if you all figure out the Trial before, with, or after Sage.  Let me know!   And (haha) I wish you all the very best of luck!

SJKOCH22

Hey, guys.  I changed the clue in Chapter nine, that's why it says its been updated.  To save everyone from re-reading the entire chapter i'm posting the only part that's been changed here:  “And tonight’s clue is,” Fallen said mysteriously and began to read, “The support of contributors should never be overlooked, surroundings never ignored, and every detail never forgotten.  The glories of knowledge can lift you high to the keys of success or drown you in defeat like age in a bucket of water.”  Fallen paused and looked at the clue as if he thought they’d somehow misworded it.  Sage listened to him repeat the last section.  “Like age in a bucket of water?  Hmm… well there you have it folks,” he chuckled, “tonight’s clue for tomorrow’s Trial.”  He smiled at each Illegal in turn.  “I hope you can all find some meaning in that, and on behalf of the watching nation, I wish you all the best of luck.”
          Thanks.  Hoping to have more updates, today or tomorrow!!!

SJKOCH22

Hey, everyone.  I had to fix Chapter Ten because I was informed that there was some repeat material in it, and I found my original notes for Sage and Asher's discussion at the beginning of the chapter (Huzzahhh!!!) so I changed it.  I think it's better now.  Read it and let me know which version you guys like best.  As always, thanks-a-million.  P.S.  Hoping to have the rest of Chapter Ten and Eleven up this week!!!

SJKOCH22

Hey everyone!!!  Sorry it took so long for the update, but it's here now.  Only half a chapter, (I hate doing that) but I felt guilty for not posting in so long.  Had family in for a week and just started a new job.  Hopefully the rest of it will be up soon.  Hope ya'll like it.  Like and Comment!  Thanks a million!!!

SJKOCH22

Hey everyone!!!!  Chapter nine is up and complete!!!  Also, I couldn't (for the life of me) think of a decent name for Fallen's TV show in this chapter, so if ya'll have any ideas, I'd love to hear suggestions!!!  BTW: his show in the chapter is currently being called the SOMETHING OR OTHER show.  Hahaha.  enjoy!!!

SJKOCH22

I'm so sorry everyone about the update.  Some family things came up, and I didn't get to post but it's up now.  Let me know what ya'll think!!!!

Horcrux3

I understand. I hope everything is ok!
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