lilhay_123

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I know you are still shaking in your boots and saying this is just beating a dead horse but I was re-reading my artbook today and someone made a really good point in the comments and I replied to them agreeing and adding in a metaphor explaining perfectly what you were really doing. 
          
          If you want to continue to not attempt you did a really asshole thing that's fine but I just don't want this to happen to anybody else. 
          
          This is what I replied: "Exactly, especially with no cognitive thought to see if you don't add something you want to author to improve on and are just insulting them it's just being rude and helping nobody. It's like a criminal threatening to rob someone, the victim puts their phone and wallet on the ground when the criminal tells them to and then does not pick up the wallet or phone and the criminal just runs away, you are not even getting what you wanted in the first place. What I mean by "what you wanted" is the story being better, then not saying how you can improve is just leaving the wallet on the ground and bolting, leaving the victim of your disgusting actions hurt and scared. It helps nobody and ends up causing extremely more harm than good. "
          
          Do with that what you will but this is what you are doing. If you don't want people to defend someone who has gotten so much hate in the past and is trying to do their best then don't be an asshole. XxDiamond did not "call his friends on me, " as you said in a previous reply he told people what happened and we decided to take action ourselves because of how wrong you were acting, absolutely disgusting. 

lilhay_123

Just wanted to let you know I posted a chapter on my art/update book explaining everything that happened and what I feel was wrong with you said. It's a bit of a truth bomb it will probably help with your ego, no offensive. 

UNIVERSE0189

HA
          
          You think you’re all high and mighty for commenting on Jeremy’s book and thinking you’ll get no reply’s? Well guess what. That ain’t happening.Not by a long shot. What you did is super unnecessary and rude. The funniest part is, you don’t have any books or followers!
          
          Maybe you should think about what you do before doing it. They teach you this in KINDERGARTEN, you coward

UNIVERSE0189

@SK33T3R For someone who’s had Wattpad for 9 months and has no followers, no books, and no reading lists, that’s pretty sad. Actually wait, that’s REALLY funny XD
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UNIVERSE0189

@SK33T3R Excuse me, what exactly did I get wrong? I made myself pretty clear. YOU should get your facts straight 
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SK33T3R

And maybe, you shouldn't assume things, refrain yourself from putting words into my mouth, and actually get your facts straight before you comment something that will instantly label you as an idiot.
            
            Welp, thanks for the free laugh dude, much appreciated!
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lilhay_123

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Hey, could you please try and use constructive criticism like telling someone what they could do better, writing tips, grammar tips, etc instead of just flat out saying something was complete shit and ruining someone's day? You are allowed to have your own opinions but nobody really asked for your criticism and it wasn't criticism at all it was just insult to injury, you first listed everything wrong, everything you hated, nothing that you liked and wanted to see more of and flat out said reading and supporting that persons work was a waste of time to read? That is seriously hurtful and destroys confidence in one's writing ability, for a lot of people writing as an escape from reality and having someone just completely ridicule you, say your work is a piece of shit, say every detail of what you hated about it, say it was a waste of time, say it was an insult to other fanfictions, do you hear yourself? Do you know how hurtful that can be? Another thing, this is a fanfiction, the author has their own unique writing style and imagination if you don't want people to use OC in a story go read a canon fanfiction and stop putting your personal opinion above someones else's, I personally don't get a lot of OC's but I still enjoy that the author has taken the time to use their imagination and put extra work into making their story unique and fun. Please learn what criticism is and stop harassing people for no reason. Just like you did to XxDiamond 0/10 stars for your actions. Learn how to be a nicer person please, have a good day. 

SK33T3R

Welp that's...inconvenient.
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lilhay_123

@SK33T3R I'd prefer to stay on Wattpad. God bless.
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SK33T3R

@lilhay_123
            
            Yes, I would love to continue this discussion, especially after the priceless reply you left me with, because there are a few issues regarding consent and privacy I'd like to discuss. Do you have a discord account? If not, then that's fine, name any social media you'd like to talk over, I'll add you.
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I_Ship_itSU

You have not written one book and your criticizing someone for a cringe book I bet you can't right as good as Jeremy

lilhay_123

@SK33T3R 
            
            Criticism should be constructive, otherwise what's the point? 
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SK33T3R

I feel as if everyone simply decided so skip past the part where I elaborated on how poorly written that fanfiction was, and instead focused on my admittedly poor choice of words.
            
            Also, it is criticism. Constructive - no, not at all, but it is criticism.
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lilhay_123

@SK33T3R 
            
            Because you know what you're doing isn't criticism and is just hateful?
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