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Hey, could you please try and use constructive criticism like telling someone what they could do better, writing tips, grammar tips, etc instead of just flat out saying something was complete shit and ruining someone's day? You are allowed to have your own opinions but nobody really asked for your criticism and it wasn't criticism at all it was just insult to injury, you first listed everything wrong, everything you hated, nothing that you liked and wanted to see more of and flat out said reading and supporting that persons work was a waste of time to read? That is seriously hurtful and destroys confidence in one's writing ability, for a lot of people writing as an escape from reality and having someone just completely ridicule you, say your work is a piece of shit, say every detail of what you hated about it, say it was a waste of time, say it was an insult to other fanfictions, do you hear yourself? Do you know how hurtful that can be? Another thing, this is a fanfiction, the author has their own unique writing style and imagination if you don't want people to use OC in a story go read a canon fanfiction and stop putting your personal opinion above someones else's, I personally don't get a lot of OC's but I still enjoy that the author has taken the time to use their imagination and put extra work into making their story unique and fun. Please learn what criticism is and stop harassing people for no reason. Just like you did to XxDiamond 0/10 stars for your actions. Learn how to be a nicer person please, have a good day.