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@GamerGurrrrl1990 wow that means a lot. Okey then even if it's bringing joy to one more person it's worth it. :)

@GamerGurrrrl1990 Well in that case, as your critic (who is a complete stranger ergo no bias) You Have To Keep Writing! Your story is engaging and fun. You understand the essence of the wizarding world that captured our imagination from Rowling. You also, capture the true essence of the original characters while placing them in new experiences with your takes. I can visualize what you’re writing which leads to it holding my attention even more. Which in this day and age is saying a lot since there’s so many other things I could be doing. You have a gift of pen - please do continue writing whether it’s more spins off or sequels of this story or a whole new one. 
            I’m South Asian as well, mixing our culture with magic makes so much of sense given our cultural beliefs in the divine and our acceptance of things we cannot explain but believe to be true. The fact that you capture that but make it light and fun - again you have a gift of creative writing  please continue it! 
            Good Luck,
            You’re faithful reader

@GamerGurrrrl1990 hahah thank you so much. There didn't seem to be much interest so I ended it early but literally have the whole parallel saga planned in my head. Two things I never liked in HP were Fred Dying and Hermione-Ron endgame (for both not just cause I'm hating on Ron). So I just imagine scenarios. Being Indian myself as a kid I always wondered what magic in South Asia would be like so writing Devi into one of my fave worlds has been great.
            
            Thanks again for taking the time. This is the first real feedback or encouragement I got for this story. It means a lot.