GhostofaSiren

I redid the cover for 'Paradise'. My longest (not finished yet) story uploaded here. Come check it out.

It's been a while, but I'm trying to consistently write every day, and have the last few nights, so I finally finished chapter 20 in Insatiable. It's a rough finish, that might be changed later, but for now, this is it.

Hello, how are you doing  
          Are you available for a discussion concerning your book performance? If you don't mind 

Revamped 'Within the Demon's' cover, and turned, "Paper Heart torn a part" into "Sordid Affair" with a new cover. Also revamped "Speak"'s cover as well. Please give them a read!

I just posted an alternate first chapter in "The Stolen Idol". I will probably keep this as the canon first chapter, but will leave the rough older version up for now.

Revamped Harper's cover again.

I revamped some covers.

I changed the blurb of 'Within the Demon's Grip' Let me know what you think of it, please. 
          
          New one: "Natalia King isn't one to bite her tongue. Her opinions have been known to start fights, especially when it concerns her best friend, Sandra and her on and off again boyfriend, Robin. While we're on the subject of hate.... Natalia hates the college party-crowd. She hates the drinking, the noise, the bad music. It all sucks. Especially the parties Robin throws. It's like he does it on purpose-- just to get on her nerves. But that's not all.
          
          Something is stalking the women at these parties, and it's not just the douche-bag guys. Can Natalia get to the bottom of it before It gets to her? Or worse, Sandra?"
          
          Old one: "Natalia doesn't want to fit in with the college party-crowd. She just wants to protect her best friend from predatory men. But that's not all that's stalking the students, and soon Natalia finds herself caught within the demon's grip with no one to save her but her friend's on-and-off again, douche-bag boyfriend."

Which blurb hooks better?
          
          "Self-proclaimed man-hater Natalia King calls herself a good friend. Maybe a bit obsessive. But a good friend. She'd go to the ends of the earth for her best friend, and one night she does. She follows Sandra and her on-again-off-again to a party at the spooky Hilton manor. Rumors say weird stuff goes down there, and Natalia soon sees it for herself."
          
          "Natalia doesn't want to fit in with the college party-crowd. She just wants to protect her best friend from predatory men. But that's not all that's stalking the students, and soon Natalia finds herself caught within the demon's grip with no one to save her but her friend's on-and-off again, douche-bag boyfriend."

I've slowly been revising 'Paradise' and I'm just wondering if I should replace the chapters on here, not replace, or make a whole new story for the revised stuff? Some of it isn't huge, but there will be changes, probably not plot changes.