SL-Jones

Now all the chapters are up. A Tale of Two Planets is ready for its audience. Thanks for reading. Your feedback means all. Cheers.

MauriceArh

Hi SL, how's things?
          Thanks for having a look at End Game. One of my doodles finally took root and turned into something (excuse the mangled metaphor). It's new, so I'm still not sure what I think about it, but then I feel that way about most things I write, so no big deal.
          How about you? Anything new in the works?

SL-Jones

@MauriceArh Thanks, Maurice. :)
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MauriceArh

Good to know the creative juices are still flowing. A fable sounds like fun. (End Game is sort of a fable, a modern one.) I always find that is the trickiest part -- when you have a beginning and an end but no middle. But if you keep nagging away at it something always seems to pop up to fill the gap. Hope it's not too long in coming. :)
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SL-Jones

@MauriceArh Hi Maurice,
            Congrats on End Game! A lot of humour. I like it. Heavy on the quirkiness. I like it. I wonder how close to the truth you are, about this presumable billionaire? Spot on, most likely.
            Yes, I'm writing something new, a fable actually. Now, I don't think it's a great idea to write a fable - who'd want to read it (except my little sister who also happen to enjoy reading the backs of milk cartons)? But I couldn't let the idea go so I'm writing it anyway. More than half of it is done, beginning and end. Now I only have to make it work, and make it interesting.
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JimHeter

Thanks for reading my non-stories.
          Of course I'd love to know what you think of them.

JimHeter

Nice. Thanks.
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SL-Jones

@JimHeter Photo's my way home, a small road on the small island I live, fields on both sides. I liked the fog.
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JimHeter

Thanks.
            I've been speculating about the background photo at the top of your page here. It's hard to make out through the fog, but on the left appears to be a field. On the right I wonder if I am seeing a hedge and then another field, or a wall and then water. Maybe a dike?
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SL-Jones

So, I'm uploading my latest book, A Tale of Two Planets. It's complete, 50 chapters in total. I'll be happy for any feedback I can get. Good fun. Thanks.

SL-Jones

@ZonderZorg Thanks for the tip. I'll remove the Mature-stamp.
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SL-Jones

@JimHeter  Yay! Thanks Jim. :)
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JimHeter

@SLJoanes 
            I opened it.
            I'm reading it.
            Already as wacky as I expected.
            I don't expect to put it down very soon.
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