SLArlint

I read. Quickly and voraciously. I love structured stories that have proper writing rules to them. Incorrect grammar/spelling and syntax drives me nutty, I can't read a story that is really bad...even if really popular. I'd love to write but I can't seem to get stories out in the way books are supposed to be written lol- just like I know how words should be spelled but can't say all of them out loud! 

BEKnight

Thank you for all the votes on my book!! 8D

BEKnight

Thank you! You are too kind! I'll start uploading the sequel once I have more reads :)
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SLArlint

@BEKnight Absolutely fantastic work! Great story, good plot, very immersing. Can't wait for more!! You deserve more reads!
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Julia4Tune

Hi Stacia!  Thank you for reading and supporting with your votes, ANOTHER story of mine, "One Without Equal".  I'm not sure how this one measures up against "Charlotte True" - I would greatly value any feedback you might be able to give.  Don't be concerned about giving me some constructive criticism;  I'm always interested to improve the writing craft!  Thank you again for all your support!  Julia

Julia4Tune

Hi Stacia, that was fantastic feedback!  Thank you for taking the time to give it.  I really appreciate your honesty and forthrightness.  Any notes you might offer would be gratefully received.  Thank you once again, Julia
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SLArlint

@Julia4Tune I've been actually struggling through One without Equal. I really, really like your writing with Charlotte but something is just off in One. Flow? It sort of drags and goes on and on and on (sorry!) and I keep going back to finish, but feel stuck in this rut where not much is happening. I think, potentially, it could benefit with you reading it and tweaking. Cutting a few unnecessary, repetitive scenes, adding some development and action. I like the premise and based off the blurb i really *want* to like all of it haha! I'm working on finishing it, I'll maybe make a few notes at the end for you?
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pixenglish

Hi Stacia. Thanks for the votes on The Cultivated Girl :-)

SLArlint

@pixenglish Its an interesting story and well written. Not only do votes mark my having read the chapter (like a bookmark) but from me, they mean I like the development and story. ;) I also feel a lot of great stories dont get read because they arent voted for! 
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pixenglish

Wow - more votes! Thank you :-)
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