@Julia4Tune I've been actually struggling through One without Equal. I really, really like your writing with Charlotte but something is just off in One. Flow? It sort of drags and goes on and on and on (sorry!) and I keep going back to finish, but feel stuck in this rut where not much is happening. I think, potentially, it could benefit with you reading it and tweaking. Cutting a few unnecessary, repetitive scenes, adding some development and action. I like the premise and based off the blurb i really *want* to like all of it haha! I'm working on finishing it, I'll maybe make a few notes at the end for you?