SOLENIDO

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SOLENIDO

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SOLENIDO

esta mensagem pode ser ofensiva 
My ranting on some azur lane fanfic
          ( just ignore it or see ot correct me if i am wrong)
          Smut or impossible plotline and probably many plot 
          Armor and same condition on Wattpad and some on 
          
          Fanfic.net
          It hard to find an good story with proper character
          Development and realistic or believable storyline 
          My problem with many azur lane fanfic 
          
          1. Wattpad - some to many stories stick azur lane 
          Anime plotline and rarly create realistic/possible storyline and some to many haream fanfiction
          0 to 100 real quick with lacking character development 
          And straight to smut after a few chapters and including op readers and character and too many crossovers and some to many plotholes and without
          Proper explain,sion or backstory etc.
          
          
          but
          
          Some good fanfic are creative and realistic/possible storyline and some main character death and filling
          plotholes with back story and explainsion and reasons
          And protagonist is balance to fight with stronger 
          Opponent to overcome the challenge to face
          
          2 Archive of our own 
          Many smut fanfics and lacking good fanfic and 
          Lacking realism/possible storyline (or more)
          
          3.fanfic.net
          I have no problem with fanfic.net it balance and 
          Some smut but mainly i have no problems
          
          https://archiveofourown.org/works/41039262
          This guy has an good point in azur lane fanfics and 
          Fucking based opinion and in commety /  humore

Maxiception

@Solomongum Thank you very much for the detailed feedback! I am happy that you like it. I will try to keep up my story quality, but i must sadly say that it is not guranteed.
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SOLENIDO

@Maxiception 
            Plus 
            
            During in the past ( 2018 ) the story I read in 
            Modern warships in azur lane
            
            I look back it's was filled with nonsense
            Logic of the MC and sometimes is filed
            With smut and harem
            
            It's sometimes they follow the azur lane 
            Anime and early create plots of there 
            Own 
            
            In using modern warships in azur lane 
            They didn't not provide any smart logic
            Or reason and in combat they go in 
            Close in and hand to hand. Instead of 
            Utilitarization of there BVRM and modern
            Tactics and doctrine. Giving there 
            Technology for small to no reason.
            Isakai for no reason or just blowing up.
            In MW in AL books
            
            However your book provides an reason
            And logic. An interesting plot and mix 
            Of AL anime and games faction.
            Like the MC to investigate an portal
            And notice an anonymity in the sea.
            Also investigate and sending and
            Rescue group. 
            ( Instead of pretend noting happens
             In most books )
            And shows how an NATO or modern day
            Shipgirl will act and plan. As have there 
            Training and memory. Used intended
            Tactics and strategies. Fatigue and 
            Damage is setting in the MC
            
            Your Story is my favorite by an longshot
            It's feels an fresh air and story feels
            Grounded and realistic . Like MW 2019
            
            You did an excellent job of this story
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            Your story is an
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SOLENIDO

@Maxiception 
            BTH 
            
            I Should not have type those questions
            
            I feel stupid sometimes
            
            You still have a lot potential and paths to 
            Take.
            
            I love your story and it's logic 
            Take your time and think it through
            
            And good luck
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