pyxelRasta

Oh what a marvel this story is. I enjoyed every bit of it. Undoubtedly the best sci-fi read on this platform. Thank you for the many blissful moments experienced while reading your work. Truly amazing...

SRCraven

@pyxelRasta Yay! Admiral Gives and the ghost are two of my favorites as well (hence why we see so much of them). The tech monks are a common point of interest. I'm going to try to show a little more of their religion, but we shall see how it goes. It's difficult to compare to the power of the imagination. :)
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pyxelRasta

@pyxelRasta My most favorite about your story is the relationship between Admiral Gives and the Singularity's AI.  Also the idea of a religion that venerates the technology that humanity invents...
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SRCraven

@pyxelRasta These are exceptionally high words of praise, thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the journey there is more to come, I'm just dreadfully slow on drafting these days. If you don’t mind my asking, did you have any particular favorite characters or moments that endeared the story to you?
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Bvfzxfu3dg

Bood Impulse is truly the best sci-fi story I have read on this platform. And I can say that it is on the same level as works like shards of earth, wich is my favorit book in the sci-fy genre!
          Please keep on writing! 
          
          Oh and may the angel watch over you. :)

SRCraven

@Bvfzxfu3dg The best you've read in a long time is such high praise! I'm not sure my self-editing skills deserve it, but that is so nice to hear! Knowing other people are invested in the story is definitely motivation to write faster. I just wish that I had more time in the day.
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Bvfzxfu3dg

@SRCraven Im gonna read that chapter in like 20 minutes and report back after.
            Oh and if you would have ended the story with the handshake I would have had to find you and made you write more cause god dam this story is just the best I have read in a long time.
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SRCraven

@Bvfzxfu3dg These are great choices! Thank you for the insight!
            
            Fairlocke was a good guy, and that was a genuinely rare thing in these worlds. I'm glad his sacrifice made an impression. 
            
            The Heaven's Ladder scene is one of my favorites too. That's one of the first instances where the layers of the Ghost's struggle are seen. No matter what decision she makes, she does not win. She is simultaneously the strongest and weakest one in the story. Her humanity is all in how one defines it. Ultimately, she would be honored to be considered a part of humanity, but there are many who would deny her that recognition.
            
            I adored that handshake scene. I wrote that years ago, it just took that long to weave it into the story. The Admiral isn't very forthcoming, but he looks after his people (and especially the ghost) in the ways he knows how, and that scene shows it. He is trying, and the ghost knows it. 
            
            As for more, I am working on it! Been a rough few months/weeks, but I just got one chapter up and there is more planned! This would be a disappointing place to end.
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JustTheCoolGuy

My friend, love to see this book on my reading list with regular updates and I read them as soon as  I get new updates. I have to say it's a masterpiece of sci fi realm. Love the addition of Hydrian mention in the stories. Spicy !! :D Respect to you .

SRCraven

@JustTheCoolGuy Haha! Those are three of my favorites as well. You will see more of all of them.
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JustTheCoolGuy

@SRCraven  colonel , admiral and ghost in that order are my favorite. I can imagine me  being like colonel as cranky as he is in future .
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SRCraven

@JustTheCoolGuy I just realized you've changed your username from what I knew it as. You were one of my first readers on this story! I'll always be grateful for that! Sorry I never got that prequel done, but you'll get to see some Hydra, as promised :)
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RavenRock2112

Just stopped by to say hello. I'm assuming that after the holidays I'm going to get to read more Blood Impulse. (Hint hint).
                    Sincerely Thy Fan, Raven

SRCraven

@RavenRock2112 I'll send it to your shared account, that way your partner can have a look-see if he/she/they want.
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SRCraven

@RavenRock2112 :) I've been working on finding some scenes (i.e. the funniest, profound...) you asked me about. I'll put it in a DM. No sense in leaving spoilers here for anyone who could (and SHOULD) go read your books.
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RavenRock2112

@SRCraven P. S.  Nice chapter. Is it cheating if I voted twice? Lol
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RavenRock2112

Hello SR, this is my main account.
          I sometimes forget when I am on the -NikaRave- account.
                       Sincerely, Raven
          P. S. Wattpad was messing up last night and only showed two parts to your story. Now that I know the story is much larger, I look forward to more reading.

SRCraven

@RavenRock2112 Hello, again! I imagine two accounts would be too confusing for me haha. I also imagine Blood Impulse made absolutely zero sense with only 2 parts! Especially if it was the first and the last! There should be more than 90+ right now, but I have known WP to get a little funky on that sometimes. :)
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-NikaRave-

Hello, thank you for the votes for Canaisis, the last living ship. I hope you found thus far intriguing and that it measures up to Sci-Fi standards. Hang on a little while longer, this is the introduction (so to speak). 
              Chronicles One and Two (hence forth C1, C2) has already been written. And, I am happy to say, C2 will pick up from literally the last sentence of Chronicle One. No "what has gone before" filler. Posting for C2 will begin shortly at a steady pace onward. I just don't want to get ahead of myself, editing is time consuming and so is writing Chronicle 3. 
             If you like action, take a peek at Depth of Sacrifice. It's a short read, 8k words, but all action with an explanation of why at the end.
               Anyways, I hope you've enjoyed Canaisis so far and, please, feel free to comment about anything.   
                     Sincerely, Raven

SRCraven

@-NikaRave- Will do! I'm looking forward to reading it!
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-NikaRave-

@-NikaRave- Chapter 37 (otherwise known as C2 Chapter 1) is for you my friend, keep a look out
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SRCraven

@-NikaRave- Hi there! No problem at all! Your work is one of the best that I've read on this site! This is actually my 3rd read-through of Canaisis, I'm just making sure to vote this time. I'm looking forward to reading Chronicle 2, and can't wait to see where the story goes! If I get time, I'll take a look at Depth of Sacrifice. I'm sure it's great! And take your time on editing, I know just how time consuming that can be, but I know I'll be waiting when you finish, even if it takes awhile.
                Best, SR
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JustTheCoolGuy

Hi, As a reader of the book Blood Impulse, I am happy to say that it is extremely thrilling and exciting. The experience of reading is amazing. While I hope you keep on writing this book till the end, I will like to suggest and request for a book based on Humans against Hydrians and wining it. The previous book before blood impluse .I think n hope many who liked this book will be eager for that too as well. 
               Thank you.

JustTheCoolGuy

@SRCraven Thank you for considering the idea.
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SRCraven

@MadhurjyaKashyap Hello there! I'm so glad you are enjoying Blood Impulse. That is great to hear. Much of the story has already been written, but I edit the parts before I post them (which is why it takes so long), so finishing the book shouldn't be a problem. As to a prequel covering the events before Blood Impulse, that is a wonderful idea! I'll make no promises, but I'll see what I can do.
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