Samurai

Heya!
          
          I hope you are doing well.
          
          Apologies for sliding into your profile, but do check out my story if time permits. It will mean a lot!❤️
          
          It's a slow and subtle blooming arranged story with a realistic backdrop and real, relatable characters that you would certainly connect to.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/262286159?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ruhani_Gupta&wp_originator=Yi%2FcgRspTueatuHNLbVqL%2FtyKkNN%2F15VdXbrALLpYb%2FjEHseA0nhP%2FSH1b%2B71qszUv4ukxJMp3YQV%2FH%2BB4%2BeEZZpmUKoMDwlMBNzbnK8Y%2BqK8YbjhwnB2N6pp0VP%2FIFK,
          
          

Please check out my story
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/355371908?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=chxrr_yy29&wp_originator=stnrNdyHSG0CKcu1CkHFzVXykyut4abkr%2FpdJDDARYj0kOppvf7l2WlkKrXb3t5hY6gSa71mTurdk6A0Zg0%2BzA%2BknEmOA7onW2iki2rNk7ZV2qV5gtK3eI2S0iziWFRi

My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited. I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories.
          There is an arranged marriage story "Billion Dollar Wedding", a teen romance "Violet Hues", a young adult "Aurora's Aura", and some mafia romances "His Captive" , "Becoming Romeo".
          Once again, I'm sorry for intruding.  
           Have a nice day ahead!!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/239672415-mafia-miss-honey

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          Namaste
          If time permits please give a chance to my friend's book. Your support would mean a lot.
          Thank you 

Hi dear...!! 
          I started reading your book on the suggestion of @aahaana02 
          First of all the story line seems of great interest and the cast collection is literally chef's kiss!!
          I have a small suggestion... I'll be obliged if you consider it and that is about the writing style...
          
          It's all good until the the writers own pov gets in between and the story is all mixed up leaves the reader in confusion....also the name of a person before the dialogue( I know that must be to make it clear about the people involved in conversation)
          But yet isn't it too old fashioned....!!
          
          I meant to say when we are reading we are completely into the book in the scene to be more appropriate So the writers own pov in between just doesn't feel good I mean it's no harm if you ask your audience about the specific scene at the end of the chapter....
          
          Please try to use (brackets) or more punctuation to describe the emotion or feeling or if its someone thought....
          
          I know I already wrote too much please do no get offended by that just take it as heart to heart advice from a friend....and at the end it's for you own benefit...hope it helps...!!
          Make sure to consider the above requests...
          
          Also if you want to knoww more you can see aahaana02 writing style in kismat , vishwaas and one more of her work....she writes really good which makes it much more easier to read and understand.... .
          
          
          Ok one last request I will be highly grateful if you add english meaning to some difficult hindi words in your writings....!!!
          
          Thank you soo much if your read it till here!!!!
          Looking forward to more of your writings and beautiful thoughts in the future!!!✨️