Kal

Hey guys, if you read any of these, please provide me with feedback. Any kind is welcome, I use criticism to improve as a writer. Unfortunately sharing this among my friends and them knowing who wrote it isn't the brightest idea. Please, please take the time to let me know what you think. If you like it, don't hesitate to share. I know I tell everyone about books like "to kiss a drug addict", "the bro code", and short stories like one about an amphetamine called 216 by JeanClaude. Please return the favor¤

OK, so I posted my very first poem andit  ended up being combined with a short story that started off as an explanation. It was probably the hardest thing I've ever had to write, but it's finally off of my chest.

I back tracked on my story in UNBOUND(THE WILD RIDE) because I royally messed it up. Couldn't take the chapter down so I just re-wrote it. Please check out Chapter 9 - Emily's Embrace.

Alright ladies and gentlemen. I wrote the short story Deal Gone Bad(Understanding the Streets) as my first attempt to write in the third person. Please feel free to give me any feed back you please on it. I'm more than willing to make changes

If there's anyone following this book, I'm not at all happy with how my last chapter came out. The main story points are there, but the events leading up to them seem rushed. I'm pulling it down and re-writing it.