@brontiide Look, I am just doing what I have been taught for years now. If you disagree with it then do it your way, but I wouldn't trust the internet all the time. And to be quiet frank, You asked for my critique and I gave you it, if you're not open to what I have to say then don't comment on the thread in the first place. You're the first person who has pointed that out to me, out of my years of experience and through my study in writing.