SZNROMANTIC

thinking about making an eddie munson fanfic.. any thoughts?

SZNROMANTIC

!! — if you see updates on my ff, i am working on changing the way that anthony and alesia meet— just because of writers block! it will not throw off the main plot, and i am only changing the last bit of chapter one, and parts of chapter two! chapter three is in the works <3 
          
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dvlansmuse

just some constructive criticism: i feel like you’re trying way too hard to write the story in a sophisticated 1800s way. to the point where it’s hard to understand and just doesn’t make sense. the details are phenomenal and you’re very talented but you’re doing too much, there’s a limit, especially since most of the things you’re explaining in such detail don’t add anything to the plot of the story. focus on the important things, and don’t force this type of classic, jane austen type of writing because it’s not working very well . just do what comes naturally to you

SZNROMANTIC

thank you so much! i will definitely use this helpful criticism in future chapters! 
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