AlvaroAbreuB
Is this part of the Slinger Trilogy?
SaberSavage
asmark
It looks like this is your first book. I want you to continue writing this story has a good feel and sound. When you write another story and rewrite this one you should get rid of your soons and an nows. Use some whiles and other time wise words. Good luck to you. Keep on writing.
SaberSavage
Check out Seigen24's books
And check out my new book Alone
SaberSavage
I change my name to Novythus and I'm changing the name of the book to Charon Age Online it's getting published soon today
SaberSavage
Hi My Name Is Imani Savage. I am currently looking forward to publishing my first book. Follow, Like!:)