Amber_dakota14
Hey sabrina,
How are you liking my story, is it going well?
Amber_dakota14
Hey so I've just done another part hope you like it
Amber_dakota14
Hi, so I have written a story it only has 3 parts so far and im really sad bc none has read it so I was wondering if you could read it and get your followers to also read it its called the forgotten one please its a Harry Potter story and lorenzo berkshire is the love interest and also if you could give me some advice please I have asked others but I don't think they've read the message
Many thanks Amber x
Amber_dakota14
@Amber_dakota14 Okay thank you so much I've been trying to get other people to read it but there not and I've read your books and they are really good
SabrinaBrowder
Also going back and giving a backstory or past memory type things are always good, they help a lot with getting the reader to connect with the character
SabrinaBrowder
It’s really good!! But I am probably not the best to ask for advice, “just the two of us” is my first book I’ve written and decided to publish and it’s not the best but what I can recommend from how I write and what I like to read is longer chapters, try going into detail, depth of what is going on and try to stick in the time frame and perspectives, I find a lot of my inspiration from other stories and pull from life, it’s hard to keep it interesting sometimes because slumps are so real and suck but you just have to push through them and write what you feel like should happen. It is your story anyways, and always remember to give credit where due (: but anyways, you’re doing great and I can’t wait to read the next chapters