marcellacrist
hey! I couldn't reply to your MANY comments because wattpad is super weird. first, if you actually paid attention while reading, you'd remember adrian killed him. it's literally in the book. and honestly, if all you're going to do is complain about every tiny thing and leave petty comments under the author's own book, maybe this series just isn't for you. no one's forcing you to read it. if you think everything should've been written differently, then go write your own book instead of acting like every decision the author made is a personal offense. this was never promised to be a perfect book, so instead of making paragraphs being so judgmental. thank you.
kiwkuz
@Sabrina_thami08 because they weren't important enough?? it's a book about bridgette and Damien not anyone else yk how their story went and that's what's important don't try to act all tuff because that's just annoying and no writer would want a reader like you
marcellacrist
@Sabrina_thami08 you've just proved our points. you seem to think that if an author doesn't explicitly write every event on the page, then it never happened. that's simply not how storytelling works. authors leave room for implication, subtext, and the reader's ability to connect dots. your criticism isn't that the story doesn't make sense, it's that it wasn't written exactly the way you wanted it to be. those are two completely different things. if that writing style isn't for you, that's fine. but calling it bad writing because it doesn't cater to your personal preference isn't an objective argument!!
Sabrina_thami08
@kiwkuz if everything can be understood by common sense then why build up a story? Just finish it with a short story and disclaimer,why introduce names,back story,plots and skip the important incidents to final result?? And as far as my comment goes I'll be glad and happy not to comment and follow the books. Thank you bitch!
