Nyssa

@youraveragecookie Back at it again with the slippery ice (insert lennie face)

@MissyMemelord back at it again with the creamy milk and crispy beef 

Lmao 

THANK YOOOOU  you don't know how much I appreciate you response. I was more invested in the thoughts you gathered while reading the chapter than the feedback so it's kewwwl. I mean, I've had friends read the chapter before I published it but they already know the general storyline so the perspective of the reader was made  more valuable because the reader knows nothing about what to expect! Your thoughts on the chapter have actually made me reeeally happy, especially your point about understanding where Nyssa's mother is coming from despite the harshness of her acts. Thank you again, I really really appreciate it Nyssa! 

@DoctorsSuccessor Im not really good at giving feedback haha  but I have to say that I loved the chapter. You have a really awesome story going on here and I also really like the small details you put into the story. I also really like how there is also a little suspense and the reader can interpret the distress the protagonist is going through trying to process the shocking information and you can empathize with the mother even if how she treated Nyssa was wrong. I really like the book :D (I hope that was alright)

Thanks 

@MusicalPuppy89 it's my pleasure I really like the story your making of garmau