Safa Anzar

@SafaAnzar thank you so much for your honest opinion, it really means alot and sure when I'll edit the story I'll definitely keep these points in my mind 

@maryam-khan1222 also when she reached his house she was admiring her surroundings but she should hate each and everything that belongs to him because practically she was standing in her father's murderer house....sorry for too many opinions... 

@maryam-khan1222 you're welcome....i want to share my opinion about the main female lead reaction when her father died her reaction was not that satisfactory i mean she should show some grief towards her father death when she got her consciousnesses...there should be a scene that shows her grief and pain  because apparently she is alone now...well thats my opinion you may disagree...btw i like your story overall...