@SafiSafina8
Hey thank you so much for listening to us readers and changing the bad things but don't listen so much too us do what you want to do it's your book yaar
@EknoorBhandari Yeah, I also felt that slapping part was not okay and when I read your comment I decided to edit it.
Between him and the oc
Will you make shreyas date his real life gf now ex i mean in the book to show the distance
@SafiSafina8 oh yaaah in 2023 he came to support the Indian football his gf was also there now she's his ex
@SafiSafina8 so basically I'm saying Will you add this all and his breakup too in the timeline in your book to show the distance
@SafiSafina8 like you know he was dating this girl best friend of mittali thakur who is trisha kulkarni and like shreyas is shardul thakur best friend so like ofcourse he dated for like almost two yrs from 2023 early from like feb to nov 2024 they broke-up she was followed by his friends Aman Khan ,sidhesh lad,a Abhishek nayar , anirudh kamat, Even ritika sajdeh, devisha shetty follows the girl and also shreyas sister shresta iyer still follows her they all of them still follow her cause like maybe it's due to maintain the social networking cause the is ofcourse mittali thakur best friend so ofcurse part of circle also his and her breakup was mutual because he was serious about her like ofcourse he introduced her to his family she was sitting in wags or family stands during the odi world cup 2023 also before that in mid 2023 during eid he took trisha with his sister to his friend aashna kanchawala iftar party also to ashna mothers birthday party later too where shreyas, Shresta, shresta bf ashitosh and trisha went to and she was seen with him and his friends and sister at a football match in india as shreyas is always a big football fan and like you must have also seen she was seen with his sister and friend anirudh kamat in the kkr stands too but after ipl she wasn't seen anywhere and in November shreyas iyer unfollowed her publicly but she still follows his private account Ofcourse he was so much serious literally took her to the Diwali party during odi world cup 2023 too I'm not blaming the girl but he was serious about marriage and all and she wasnt much and they had a mutual breakup so this is why all his friends and sister all still follow the girl
Hey just wanted to say your book lost in love is really could but could you put inverted commas for the dialogues it's difficult to understand otherwise
@SafiSafina8 your English is perfectly fine it's just you know without the inverted commas it's difficult it understand which is a dialogue being said ahd which it description
@EknoorBhandari I don't know English so well and I am still a beginner but I will try to do as you asked, maybe in the upcoming chapters after my exams are over.
