Saharaj

Hey guys! I'm sorry I haven't posted in such a long time. I edited "Apocalypse House" a bit, so take a look at that. I have more story ideas to work on, so look for new stories soon!

ella1292

Its really good except maybe you should use some different sentence structure? Like not just simple sentences maybe. Idk i guess it just got boring because in the first chapter it kept saying "she had;she has",ect. Otherwise its really good :)
          btw im ultradrizzle on tumblr

Saharaj

Thank you! That's what's bugging me too. I'm planning on going back and fixing some things
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