Saharaj

Hey guys! I'm sorry I haven't posted in such a long time. I edited "Apocalypse House" a bit, so take a look at that. I have more story ideas to work on, so look for new stories soon!

Saharaj

I absolutely love the concept for The Purge, so I plan on writing my own version of it, from the viewpoints of three different people, and there will be more crimes than just murder. What do you guys think?

sabrynabrooklynne

I saw your post om my board. I am going to check out some of your stories.Is "Valiant: " your only TG story? I read that one before.
           So you read some of mine? If so could you take a moment to leave me so feedback on the stories and let me know what you thought/felt while reading each one. People's comments keep me going and help me to improve the next chapter or story. Thanks. Oh, and if you didn't I invite you to check out my current work in progress, REBORN.

ella1292

Its really good except maybe you should use some different sentence structure? Like not just simple sentences maybe. Idk i guess it just got boring because in the first chapter it kept saying "she had;she has",ect. Otherwise its really good :)
          btw im ultradrizzle on tumblr

Saharaj

Thank you! That's what's bugging me too. I'm planning on going back and fixing some things
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