EricLocke
Hey brother. I read your story! You have a fantastic idea and plot line, as well as interesting characters. I think you would benefit greatly by running your story through Grammarly to help clean up some of the grammatical errors. Also, in some of your scenes you could use more a little more depth to make your story shine.
But overall I dig it! Keep up the great work!
Saichaitanyakashetty
@EricLocke Thank you so much for the review it really means a lot to me. Yeah sure i will check the grammatical errors and make it clear that it will not repeat from my next chapters. Yeah and i didn't use the depth because i wi add more detailing in my future chapters and that's the reason i didn't make them clear. I hope you enjoy the future chapters too. Once again thank you so much for the review it really cheered me up. Have a great day