Klinked
Hi again, one when's the next chapter? Also I'm writing a ghost story right now so I may not be able to stay current on this. I'm constantly reading everyone's work. Your a good stage director, but honestly your missing one part. Scene settings should be written in. Every time a new scene occurs you need a setting, which should be placed above the scene. It's a good way to help tell your story.
Klinked
@Saiko8507 Its about a newly awakened medium. He has a strong understanding but makes several mistakes along the way. He quit highschool at the age of 16 and leaves his parents because they think he's crazy. Moves in with his uncle who forces him to get a job. After he moves in to his uncles guest house he discovers this whole town is rampant with unclean spirits and while he's trying to figure out why him and his girl friend atract the presence of a giant wraith demon. He has to figure out how to balance both lives at a very young age and not die.
Saiko8507
Hello I usually drop every Friday when I can, so weekly chapters and I definitely will add some scene settings I want the world to feel alive so that’s definitely important, so thank you for that honestly and what’s your ghost story about?