@Peren_or_Primin
Okay, well, I finished editing. Dude, do you do this on your tablet? Cause seriously, I found soooo maaaannnyyy mistakes. Legit.
ex. Sora was spelled Sorrow
ex. Prima was spelled Pricle ~ that took me a long to figure what is was supposed to mean
So well um, ya! Your fan-fic is seriously turning out great. Also, I found our that you are following one of my friends ~ Carolyn Yuan. Lol. Never in a hundred years did I expect you to follow her. Seriously. XD
Anyway, how is life? XD