I love your story writing and you engage the readers into anticipating how the next chapter is going to be, you have that gift....
In 'the boss affair' however, you make it sound like sending an invitation to Sebastian is a major upheaval and the mistakes seems to be a 'big' one for his Secretary. But in the next chapter or two, Liam seem to be expecting Sebastian to attend the party and the mistake part seems to be redundant. Why?
It practically broke my heart a little when Alex seem to fall hard for Sebastian which, I felt sorry for Liam, even though he's a douche, he is sweet and caring at heart. Please make the competition a little less heartbreaking for Liam.....
