I loved your mob story, it's amazing!! I hope there will be an update soon (sorry if something is wrong, I don't know how to speak English and I'm using the translator)
Rewriting some of my old chapters in my concepts book. I’ll be adding a lot more flavour and texture to them so I suggest you reread the first chapter, which is the only one I’ve rewritten so far. I’ll also be deleting some cringe worthy chapters I very much regret.