Sailorplanet97

i just finished not just 1 chapter but 2 chapters, i changed things a little to match better with the chapters i've finished or else it will mix other chapters up so it will be all over the place, i prevented it from happening
          	
          	1 chapter was about creating a mess and the other is the 2 years earlier with the way how it all really started, kind of like a flashback, you should take a look at it
          	
          	and it's coming from someone who's bad at creating dramas or chaos in the stories but in my opinion it turned out quite good
          	
          	i saved an another chapter up that's published now incase i ran out of ideas, i've thought about that
          	
          	the chapter i'm now working on, some things stays the same but i started to change my mind that's drafted for now
          	
          	the reason is because i want atleast 1 fairy who's not trapped in something or someone, manage to hide itself and set someone free before saving the day (a hint, it's the character who plays an important role, kind of like a main character in the story)

Sailorplanet97

yes you're fine don't worry, i like it :)
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ConradThauberger

@Sailorplanet97 I just hope you liked where I've mentioned you, it was just checking.
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Sailorplanet97

@ConradThauberger thanks, i'm still alive haha :)
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ConradThauberger

Hi Sailorplanet. It's me.
          
          I am just glad you are doing okay.
          
          I also wondering for the next chapter of the alternate Tinker Bell idea. Since I did needed to have a heavy moment for Vidia as living down her rivalry she had on the year before the misunderstanding on the mainland, is too impossible and seeing those three flashbacks would make her more ashamed that she would've been crying over it. As I just thought Tink and Vidia making immense and putting their rivalry aside seemed a bit too quick. 
          
          Even have some of the other fairies of Pixie Hollow still don't trust Vidia, like turning away from her with their arms folded and remain putt off by her presence. Kind of like a similar struggle Sunset Shimmer had since her redemption and excepting friendship.
          
          Now I also wonder about the next chapter, which can be who can bond with Lizzy and Martin the most? I mean, think of it. With any human Pixie Dust invented, maybe secretly by Zarina, it can have Tink and her fairy friends interact with humans and understand each other more clearly, while still keeping their magical talents, as they just become humongous and their wings disappeared. 
          
          But when Tink left and joins Peter, who of her friends can bond with Lizzy and Martin? Even by far soon becoming part of their family, gaining a husband and a daughter?
          
          Could it be Vidia? As it can be her time to start over and make immense with them and need their comfort as she was still hurt over the argument she and Tink had, but also about how she thought of them and acted to them because of her point of view of the misunderstanding.
          
          Or could it be Periwinkle? Even though she never met Lizzy before, she could always be able to support her and will feel her devastation she would have if she never sees Tink again if she left.

Sailorplanet97

i just finished not just 1 chapter but 2 chapters, i changed things a little to match better with the chapters i've finished or else it will mix other chapters up so it will be all over the place, i prevented it from happening
          
          1 chapter was about creating a mess and the other is the 2 years earlier with the way how it all really started, kind of like a flashback, you should take a look at it
          
          and it's coming from someone who's bad at creating dramas or chaos in the stories but in my opinion it turned out quite good
          
          i saved an another chapter up that's published now incase i ran out of ideas, i've thought about that
          
          the chapter i'm now working on, some things stays the same but i started to change my mind that's drafted for now
          
          the reason is because i want atleast 1 fairy who's not trapped in something or someone, manage to hide itself and set someone free before saving the day (a hint, it's the character who plays an important role, kind of like a main character in the story)

Sailorplanet97

yes you're fine don't worry, i like it :)
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ConradThauberger

@Sailorplanet97 I just hope you liked where I've mentioned you, it was just checking.
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Sailorplanet97

@ConradThauberger thanks, i'm still alive haha :)
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