Leontine Ketting

Hi pal. It's been a while.
          
          But I hope you liked the new chapter I made yesterday.

Hello I wanted to ask you if I can delete some of my old comments, I need to do that sometimes to make new comments.

I made a new chapter. I thought of having it to be an explanation of what backstory for Vidia of what her life was before the events of the first Tinker Bell film.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1535036306-pixie-hollow-backstory-of-vidia

Hey buddy. I just hope you have seen my reply in one of your comments in the chapter.

How are you doing, friend?
          
          I just hope you can see the edit I made.

Hi Sailorplanet. It's me.
          
          I am just glad you are doing okay.
          
          I also wondering for the next chapter of the alternate Tinker Bell idea. Since I did needed to have a heavy moment for Vidia as living down her rivalry she had on the year before the misunderstanding on the mainland, is too impossible and seeing those three flashbacks would make her more ashamed that she would've been crying over it. As I just thought Tink and Vidia making immense and putting their rivalry aside seemed a bit too quick. 
          
          Even have some of the other fairies of Pixie Hollow still don't trust Vidia, like turning away from her with their arms folded and remain putt off by her presence. Kind of like a similar struggle Sunset Shimmer had since her redemption and excepting friendship.
          
          Now I also wonder about the next chapter, which can be who can bond with Lizzy and Martin the most? I mean, think of it. With any human Pixie Dust invented, maybe secretly by Zarina, it can have Tink and her fairy friends interact with humans and understand each other more clearly, while still keeping their magical talents, as they just become humongous and their wings disappeared. 
          
          But when Tink left and joins Peter, who of her friends can bond with Lizzy and Martin? Even by far soon becoming part of their family, gaining a husband and a daughter?
          
          Could it be Vidia? As it can be her time to start over and make immense with them and need their comfort as she was still hurt over the argument she and Tink had, but also about how she thought of them and acted to them because of her point of view of the misunderstanding.
          
          Or could it be Periwinkle? Even though she never met Lizzy before, she could always be able to support her and will feel her devastation she would have if she never sees Tink again if she left.

i just finished not just 1 chapter but 2 chapters, i changed things a little to match better with the chapters i've finished or else it will mix other chapters up so it will be all over the place, i prevented it from happening
          
          1 chapter was about creating a mess and the other is the 2 years earlier with the way how it all really started, kind of like a flashback, you should take a look at it
          
          and it's coming from someone who's bad at creating dramas or chaos in the stories but in my opinion it turned out quite good
          
          i saved an another chapter up that's published now incase i ran out of ideas, i've thought about that
          
          the chapter i'm now working on, some things stays the same but i started to change my mind that's drafted for now
          
          the reason is because i want atleast 1 fairy who's not trapped in something or someone, manage to hide itself and set someone free before saving the day (a hint, it's the character who plays an important role, kind of like a main character in the story)

Thanks and I hope you will use my ideas, which one did you love the best ? 

i'm still active in here no worries, some chapters are still drafted but i started to have my doubt on a certain chapter
          
          the story plot hasn't changed, 2 antagonist who are enemies to each other who have to work together to save the day
          
          but the part i started to have my doubt is the part 2 fairies get caught by the creatures (thankfully this one fairy manage to set itself free after a bit)
          
          should i only create a chapter only 1 fairy get caught while the other one just like get away with it by making itself invisible doing a high risk to save its enemy of an attempted murder by the creatures? (2 fairies are punished doing a different task, that still hasn't changed)
          
          i was sick nearly 2 weeks ago and stayed in bed but i'm doing good now
          
          i published a theory on one of the Tinkerbell characters if it makes you feel better?
          
          what do you think with the part (drafted one) about the creature ones who are like fairy hunters who kills a fairy off?
          
          my original chapter was supposed to be like when 2 fairies get caught (not at the same time) by the creatures and get trapped somewhere but i started to have my doubt about getting 2 fairies caught (1 fairy still get caught i have in mind for sure, it's similar to this fairytale theatre how a pirate captures a fairy to grant 3 wishes, just differently)
          
          i'm curious with your decisions about my idea about continuing 2 fairies getting caught? or just 1 fairy who gets caught by the creatures while the other hide itself nearby untill its the right time to show up? i can't choose
          
          i drafted an epilogue scene and that part remains the same, i just have struggles with one of the chapters i drafted for now
          
          have a nice day :)

i was just thinking lately based on what i'm working on
          
          what if i create a chapter *(probably the next chapter after working on the current chapter which i'm still struggling at with dangerous animals or creatures in which i still need your help)* about 2 main character's point of view to make it more interesting?
          
          maybe the one point's of view after the incident on the mainland (from the earlier chapter)
          
          and the other point's of view after the other certain fairy is born
          
          what do you think about this idea?