@sainee06
Hey Author!
I understand that you’re also a student, but I wanted to give you a small suggestion as a regular and old reader.
Your description and prologue are really good, but it would be great if you could try to make the chapters a bit longer. Longer chapters help engage readers and show your dedication to the story. I want you to improve the length and depth of your writing because your story has a lot of potential.
Also, you shouldn’t force readers to complete goals or targets too early. First, focus on growing your views and readers. When your story starts getting more views (for example, above 150), then you can set targets. You cannot demand targets from readers in the beginning; it’s better to first promote your book and let more people discover it.
I’m not ordering you—these are just suggestions so that your first attempt doesn’t fail. If anything I said sounded offensive, I’m really sorry; that wasn’t my intention at all.
If you ever need ideas or inspiration, you can also read other books or even check my or other following reading lists—not for copying or plagiarism, but just to understand different styles and improve your own writing.
Again, these are just friendly suggestions. Your story is good; I just want to help you make it even better.