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Hey guys after reviewing the legacy of Tommy Egan and looking at Power, Powder, Respect. I feel like I could've done more with the story like I did make it a bit different but it still followed the main story which is good but then looking at Power, Powder, Respect I'm like there's more I could done with...
          
          1. Tariq vs Y/N beef in season 2
          
          Don't get me wrong. Y/N did hate Tariq but then it should have been explored more like I feel like from the start Y/N should've left the Tejadas because he didn't want to work with Tariq. Then Mecca finds him and Y/N joins him. Making Y/N a competitor rather than a side enemy who is on both sides. But otherwise the rest I'm fine with but yeah.
          
          2. Monet killing Mecca.
          
          Honestly looking back, I feel like season 2 should been like season 3 of power, Y/N and Tariq team up and make a plan to kill Mecca and they personally kill Mecca without the Tejadas. That would've made it feel like more like Ghost and Tommy.
          
          3. Y/N going legitimate in season 3.
          
          I mean considering the ambulance business was a laundering place. I feel like Y/N should've just used it to launder his money end of story. The fact that he worked there was just something I didn't think of at the time but I now realize I shouldn't have done.
          
          Okay, I think that's all I had a problem with but yeah sometimes you just look back and realize you could've done more with something.
          
          

Hey guys,I recently watched Friday. I had only ever watched the second one but now that I watched the first one, I want to write a story about the first one. What y'all think?

Episode 7 is out! Tommy and Y/N continue to make moves to reach their goal.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716

Hey guys. Sorry about the delay but here's the chapter. Episode 6 is out! With Walter gone, Tommy and Y/N have access to the North Side but unexpected challenges stand in the way. Be sure to check it out as soon as you can.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716

Episode 5 is out! As Tommy and Y/N deal with D-Mac's situation. Y/N continues to makes moves with Claudia and Vic. Be sure to check it as soon as you can.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716

Episode 4 is out! The Egan duo meet a problem that escalates beyond what they thought. Be sure to check it out as soon as you can.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716

Episode 3 is out! The Egan duo continues to approach their goal despite challenges. Be sure to check it out as soon as you can.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716

Hey guys this is about the heir of Ghost story. Yeah I kinda feel like a change is in order so there I was thinking of changing the actor that portrays Y/N to Xolo Maridueña. What do y'all think?

Snowfall story please update it I have NOT seen one with a male mc and yours is actually good