@Saint4528
I know it's been a while but school has been keeping me busy but here it is. Episode 8 is finally here! Tommy and Y/N are getting closer to the top and with that comes for obstacles for them to face. Be sure to check it out as soon as you can.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716
So what do you think about season 5 episode 7
@JeremiForte SPOILERS AHEAD!! I kinda did expect Kanan to be the one to kill Marvin but Juke killing Snaps and Pops was a bit unexpected and seeing Raq's downfall go this way is something I didn't expect. All I can say about the rise of a L/N is that the same way y'all hate Tariq and Kanan might be the same way you'll hate Y/N because this season is Y/N's point of no return.
@saint4528 what did you think about episode 5 of raising kanan season 5
@saint4528 I think it If Y/N had been there, I honestly think things would've played out differently. Y/N would've tried to step in and protect Kanan, even if it meant getting pushed aside or taking a hit from Marvin. because from a young age they both have been looking out for each other
@Browhfrjn To be honest, I think it was a good episode. One that highlighted Breeze and showed us the reason behind Ghost saying he was gonna get them all killed. Also this showed Raq's beginning downfall as one she no longer moves the way she used to. She now reacts rather than making more calculated moves in an attempt to hurt Kanan the way she views he hurt her and her telling Marvin was definitely proof that she is beginning to lose the ability to have composure. Also the beat down Marvin gave Kanan was crazy. If Y/N was there, what do you think would happen? Would Kanan still be the one getting beaten up or would Y/N help Kanan who knows?
Spoilers ahead for those who haven't seen episode 4 of Raising Kanan season 5.
Hey guys. I've been watching season 5 of Raising Kanan. I won't lie, the fact that Breeze is actually Def Con's son was unexpected making him, Kanan and Y/N technically brothers.
In the rise of a L/N, I won't lie I will get back to it but then that's up to y'all like I did before when I finish Power, Powder, Respect. It will be up to y'all to decide which story I continue.
But then season 2 to 3, will be the last time we see a less ruthless version of Y/N. Because after season 4, getting into season 5 Y/N will have a downward spiral where he becomes more numb, all the values keeping him the same, gone. Y/N will basically be like Breeze.
Honestly I hope I get to continue the story someday.
Are you continuing fear street
@Lcevahall Hopefully but like right now I've been too busy with school to write so I can't really say when I will go back to it because of the power stories.
Hopefully you get back into the saint
@KamarionMccall Honestly there's times where I want to go back maybe after Power,Powder, Respect.
Hey guys after reviewing the legacy of Tommy Egan and looking at Power, Powder, Respect. I feel like I could've done more with the story like I did make it a bit different but it still followed the main story which is good but then looking at Power, Powder, Respect I'm like there's more I could done with...
1. Tariq vs Y/N beef in season 2
Don't get me wrong. Y/N did hate Tariq but then it should have been explored more like I feel like from the start Y/N should've left the Tejadas because he didn't want to work with Tariq. Then Mecca finds him and Y/N joins him. Making Y/N a competitor rather than a side enemy who is on both sides. But otherwise the rest I'm fine with but yeah.
2. Monet killing Mecca.
Honestly looking back, I feel like season 2 should been like season 3 of power, Y/N and Tariq team up and make a plan to kill Mecca and they personally kill Mecca without the Tejadas. That would've made it feel like more like Ghost and Tommy.
3. Y/N going legitimate in season 3.
I mean considering the ambulance business was a laundering place. I feel like Y/N should've just used it to launder his money end of story. The fact that he worked there was just something I didn't think of at the time but I now realize I shouldn't have done.
Okay, I think that's all I had a problem with but yeah sometimes you just look back and realize you could've done more with something.
@Brian2912 I honestly have been contemplating that but given I have Power, Powder, Respect, The rise of a L/N, The Saint and more stories to write. I just haven't seen the opportunity to do that yet.
You could rewrite it and incorporate these changes
Hey guys,I recently watched Friday. I had only ever watched the second one but now that I watched the first one, I want to write a story about the first one. What y'all think?
@saint4528 that sounds fire
Episode 7 is out! Tommy and Y/N continue to make moves to reach their goal.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716
Hey guys. Sorry about the delay but here's the chapter. Episode 6 is out! With Walter gone, Tommy and Y/N have access to the North Side but unexpected challenges stand in the way. Be sure to check it out as soon as you can.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/398317716