@SaintCML Thanks so much for the vote and comment on my fanfic. I really appreciate and your feedback was definitely really helpful. I haven't started to go back and edit the story yet so when I do I'll definitely remember your suggestion and apply it. I definitely agree that the character description was very sudden and should've been saved for later. I did tend to do that a couple years ago (when I started writing the story) and hopefully I'm not still doing it now. But all in all, thank you. I really, really appreciate your comment. Hope you continue to read, enjoy, and leave constructive comments like your last one.
