Saint_Fodder

Chapter 4: The Past is out!!!
          	This one talks about Tamani

Deepali8

@Saint_Fodder This story is captivating. You must complete it. 
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Victoriaa570

Salut ! J'ai découvert ton profil grâce à un commentaire que tu avais laisser sur un livre à propose de Billie Eillish. Est ce que tu pourrais aller lire le livre que j'écris avec ma pote et nous donner ton avis ? L'identifiant qu'on utilise c'est Ivy_Parker347.
          Merci d'avance

Sarang_swastik

Hi! I saw your message and checked out your book. Th idea is great but I really think the delivery could be better. One thing that I am more than sure will help you is allowing your reader connect with the main character and frankly your story lost that. So that was my advise for you. I am too open to advise, well if you offer for my story. 
          Have a nice day