hey , I saw your comment on my book and decided to read your story , it's so good I read all chapters at once , please keep this work going I wanna know what happens next soon badly !!
Salut ! J'ai découvert ton profil grâce à un commentaire que tu avais laisser sur un livre à propose de Billie Eillish. Est ce que tu pourrais aller lire le livre que j'écris avec ma pote et nous donner ton avis ? L'identifiant qu'on utilise c'est Ivy_Parker347.
Merci d'avance
Hi! I saw your message and checked out your book. Th idea is great but I really think the delivery could be better. One thing that I am more than sure will help you is allowing your reader connect with the main character and frankly your story lost that. So that was my advise for you. I am too open to advise, well if you offer for my story.
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