arohisinghania2
Thank you for liking my chapter
arohisinghania2
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Yellowdaisyxstories
Hey thankyou for voting my book.. And for showering lots of love on it.
Yellowdaisyxstories
@SakshiSharma638355 I understand your Point of view but I just want to give a message to my readers by my story... And the message is -"Kuch sach humare bhale ke liye chupae jaate hai to agar woh kabhi aapko pata lage to apna control loose karne se phle saamne wale ki sunni chahiye usse ek mauka dena chaahie... Aur sabse importnt kisi ki baaton mai aakar apna relationship khrab nahi karna chahiye".. In my story Rits and Vi hide the truth par rits ne usse dhoka nahi diya.. She was loyal to him everytime... Rits ki galti nahi hai par woh suffer kar rahi hai.... Gussa aana act karna apni jagh sahi hai par saamne wale ki sunna bhi Must important hai.. Aur mai time ki kami ki wajah se story ko khtm karne ki jaldi hai warna mai aur acche se describe kar paati.. Par meri bhi problem hai.. I'm sorry if I not do a justice with Rohit character aur with your interest.
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SakshiSharma638355
@Yellowdaisyxstories you are doing a great job but can I say something I hope you don't mind.. but showing ro like he is the most guilty is a little weird like anyone would be super pissed if they get to know this .. just my opinion sorry if you felt bad
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celestial1love
Thanks for voting
Jeelvyas03
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thevirgogirl14
Thank you for voting my story Please do check out my other works too and continue to vote and support ☺️ Do share your thoughts and suggestions regarding the story