Salamander451

@omaraguirre Thank you! Not a problem and I remember the reveal now actually. 

@Salamander451 I get what you’re saying about the family, thats the thing though. Aaron believed he was in a perfect family, but as the story progresses, he’ll realize that he was never in one to begin with. I actually give a huge hint in the Prologue (The smoke outside) that will player later on.
            
            And about your story, I’ll definitely check it out as soon as I get time. I added it to my library, so I’ll take a look at it in the days to come!
            
            Thank you for sticking with me man! It means a lot!

@omaraguirre I like it so far, but my only grievance is how perfect a family life Aaron had. It's too perfect and kind of makes him hard to relate with. I'm not saying make it miserable I'm just saying maybe say something along the lines of,
            "He hardly ever remembers crying in his house". That way it's stating it has happened before but was a very rare occurrence. 
            
            On another note you are one of the people on here who inspired me to write my own Alien Invasion book. It's called New Reality you should check it out! Reads and votes would be way helpful! 
            
            Keep up the good work!