I've change the format of the first few pages, people, the prologue is a part of the first chapter, and my narrator had been introduced.
Check it out, tell me what you think.
I have just found your work and I'm interested to start reading (and providing comments). I've got a new story (called Eliza: The Wanted One) with little reads so wondering if you'd check it out??? :) Hope you have a good day. Best Ellie.