Salix

I reread my fic, after reading more fan fictions. I realized that it was bad, like really bad. I feel like the story is also rushed and theres not enough details. So I unpublished the latest chapter, I'm planning to rewrite it.
          
          Sorry for this.

I need help, cause how tf does one write a poem, I need to learn how to write one before July 12, i wanna write a love poem for my gf who lives so fucking far away. 
          
          I want to write it, as a birthday present for her, its not much, but its the best I can do. I cant meet her or anything because I would need to board a plane just to meet her, and im still a minor and a brokie.
          
          Ik this is not important but i just need some advice on how to write a poem.

I'm in the mood for some angst for the story "Blood sucker and the Hunter" but my friend who wrote the story with me wants some smut. She's very freaky;-;
          
          I kinda wanna do both on my other fic, "Lumity fic.." but which character should I kill or which character should go missing? But if I do smut on both fics. It would be messed up because neither of us knows how to write spicy scenes.

My story exposed is updated.

School is so mentally draining, but today is Friday, and tomorrow is the weekend,  so i think i will be able to update the fic? I dont really know, i got home early, because of my period cramps, it hurted like a lot so they let me go home early. Also I think I can update the fic at least once or twice a week. So yeah, i know this isnt really important but, i still felt the need to announce it, instead of uploading it in the fic as a non chapter, that will be very disappointing, the comments are really funny and it gives me a lot of motivation to write even more chapters, so far i got a new chapter ready, but only half of it was done, since i only did it during school and had little time. I will try to make it a longer one, since I only ever write a thousand or less words per chapter. So yeah, Salix out.

So im writing a new fic, still about lumity, but i dont know if its good or bad. Please read it if you guys like, please tell me your honest opinion about it.. its still the prologue and its short.. i have no idea what to put for the cover picture

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