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Signing off i may come later...have fun with discussing guys❤
KingofmyHeartLouis
I didn't get any notification for the earlier announcement ಠ,_」ಠ Never mind ... People won't hate Louis.... And the third chapter will be published soon after the second chapter...Now I need an explanation why Simon's surname is Cowell and Louis'is Tomlinson... so can it be like this: Louis' mother's second husband is Simon and Louis kept his Tomlinson surname. . . As Louis is Simon's step son,he hated Louis and tortured him.... Louis' mother couldn't conceive again for some kind of reason and out of nowhere Simon came with an infant who was Amelia.... At first Louis'mother was happy but later she came to know that Amelia was the result of Cowbell's affair ....bruhhh ಠ益ಠ I don't know...Is it fine with y'all??¯\_ಠ_ಠ_/¯
Sairab965
@audshi1shayan @sm13loveslou sorry a mistake "who looked same age as him" is the correct one
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Sairab965
@audhsi1shayan @sm13loveslou Guys this is the reason I keep telling put our Louis' life soon cuz I saw a hate comment on some other Zayn fanfic which said that "shut up Zayn is nothing like that" cuz in that story Zayn was rude and fan didn't like it a bit..even I was mad.. that's why I keep on telling to put that chapter soon...we can't make haters to our story... that's why guys... nothing else..❤
KingofmyHeartLouis
@SairaB965 is dead...R.I.P ...XD
sm13loveslou
Ok so key points from my side: - First Samaira reaches the restaurant late and gets a mouthful from her boss and blah blah - Then Rachel, her friend omes and she's going on abt Harry -And so Harry is introduced as he tries flirting with Samaira - Samaira serves someone, either a stranger or Simon and they get into a fight.. -Then Louis comes in talking rubbish with his one night stand.. - Samaira instantly hates him and she stands up against him -Rama abt the girl leaving Louis and Samaira almost getting fired - Niall may or may not come in..? - Zayn just observes and admires Samaira.. That's all I figured and we'll, ix it up now.. XD. @audshi1shayan @Sairab965 @sharanyatomlinson
KingofmyHeartLouis
@sm13loveslou nyah...I was talking about 3 and 4... Just clearing the whole scenario...XD
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KingofmyHeartLouis
So the key points of the second chapter?? @SairaB965 @sm13loveslou @sharanyatomlinson
Sairab965
@audshi1shayan @sm13loveslou I forgot to put this on my comments (insert laughing emojis) just read those
Sairab965
My suggestions are pure crap lol don't mind my suggestions..this is how it going to be The person who will got spilled will be Louis and Louis will slap her Noo, my heart hurts Louis will never do that omg (insert laughing emojis)
Sairab965
But guys we need to do the second chapter with Louis' pov just so we can bring how his life is with just one best friend Zayn and his worst damn father Simon...idk think of it
KingofmyHeartLouis
@Sairab965 yeah!!! It will be in the Fourth chapter and third chapter...✌️✌️
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sm13loveslou
I'll read everything discussed and try to come up with my rough version of ch2 when I get time