Sam20606

Wassssuppp Guys 

Sam20606

Is this too bland for the starting of a backstory ?
          
          " Over two Hundred years ago , there were two kingdoms at war . The Mighty Atlantis and the Legendary Athens , both sides fought fiercely , the blood lost in the war turned the soil red and the rivers bloody " 

Sam20606

@Sam20606 hmmm I should change the "blood " to " lives " I think 
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crossingthevoid

@Sam20606 I don't think it's bad; my only concern is the repetition of blood and bloody in the last part.
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Sam20606

Do you believe the myth of the lost city called Atlantis?

Sam20606

@Sam20606 somewhat yea ....it's interesting and you can create your own theory about it too 
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See_See143

@Sam20606  ohh so it's part of Ancient European History. Great I'll read about it if got chance.  
            Thanks for the knowledge 
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Sam20606

Although some people say it was a surface city before a unknown casualty which resulted it to being destroyed and lost
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Sam20606

Sam20606

Food for thought (idk what this is but it's something)
          
          Embrace Chaos or Run from it ? 
          What I mean is ....do you run from a difficult time or do you face it head on ? 

Sam20606

@YOUCDI same here..lol
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YOUCDI

I definitely am not a face difficulties type of person 
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Sam20606

Food for thought 
          " The repercussions of our past , defines our present " 
          What do you think? Does the past influence the present or maybe the  your future?

Sam20606

@crossingthevoid yep it keeps building up and eventually our past will catch up to us someday . 
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Sam20606

@YOUCDI absolutely right !!!
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crossingthevoid

@Sam20606 totally agree they help shape it, but emphasis on the word "help." They push us in one direction or another, but the saving grace is that they don't completely control us. To paraphrase Adam Altar: our present is the collective endpoint of a billion tiny butterfly effects.
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