SamBro98

@LisaStanbridge for what book I'm curious :) Falling for the player?

Hi there, just wanted to say a huge thanks for reading and commenting on 'In Love With Mr Wilson'. I hope you've enjoyed so far and will continue reading. :)
          
          I looked at your profile and it's great to meet a fellow writer. Just a word of advise, the story idea you have is very unoriginal - it's been done so many times. I'm not saying don't write it, I'm just saying make it original in your own way. Good luck! :D x

hey check out my new book warrior girl it is based on a true story of my life....but just with a few name tweeks hope you enjoy :)

sorry I haven't updated I have been busy with exams. so I am going to update the second chapter today. please follow and comment about your opinions towards my story

It was a great first chapter! Maybe add some more emotions if you'd like you could email your chapters to me and I could edit your chappy's!! And maybe like in an authors note you could put which actors an actresses that could play your characters! So people who read your story will make that connection and as for the next or distant chappy maybe you could add a scene where they're at a house party and everyone's dancing and stuff and some drama goes down in a game they play like truth or dare or 7 minutes in heaven (and a secret is told in those 7 minutes) or something like that xp lol I'll message you again if any other ideas come up but you could build chapters up to an intense/important moment like the one above xp hope this helps!!! :)

any story ideas u want me to write