SamiRose18

New story is out! Hope you enjoy!

SamiRose18

Just a few things. Punctuation is something to look at. Some areas are too much and other very little. But mainly good. 
          
          The other thing is the plot is a little hard to follow. It was confusing to understand the story and I feel it went fast. 
          
          It's a good idea! These are jaunt a few suggestions to consider. 

AWESOMEperson453

Hi I was wondering if you would mind if I did an Aunt Natasha story but instead of Percy it would be Leo if it's okay with you tell cuz I know that it was your original idea for Natasha to be an aunt thanks bye 

Sakshipink2008

@AWESOMEperson453 omm when will story be out thow
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SamiRose18

That's perfectly fine! We aren't the only ones with the idea. Feel free
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