Sami Ruse

I'm writing another story. It's about Louis and Harry and I'm not sure how it's gonna work but when it is up and running I want everyone to let me know what needs changed what I can make different anything. I'm begging for criticism here. 

Almost 3k readers on Living The Dream thank you guys so much for reading. Sorry it's been so long to update life is so hectic. I'm working on too many stories at one time. Thanks
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