SamidharSamidhar
My exams are finished, finally I can relax now.
SamidharSamidhar
Sara-Danna
Hello, I was reading a bit of the story and I recommend that if you don't want to include such long texts in the scenes, you shorten them with key words. Also, with the clothing, it's not essential to describe it perfectly—just a brief description of the outfits or locations, or something more detailed in the scenes you want to emphasize.
Keep working on it; I like the direction your work is taking.
-SAI
SamidharSamidhar
@Sara-Danna Ohhh Thank you , I'm glad that you like it but the actual thing I want is you to enjoy my story nothing more. Since I saw you're also a fan of deidara like me. Are you going to read the full story? Just asking, That's okay if you don't want to. Thank you again
SamidharSamidhar
I want to make a new story who should I make this story over??
SamidharSamidhar
@Akidaki18 this ship is already involved In my story but with more ships. However you gave me a excellent idea over them!!, I'll sure make a story over them if others also would like to read it but what about making another story over other someone?? Who should I make this?
