TalliszLevaii

Hey, I put the second chapter out and I would like you to essentially criticize it so I could improve it, and I can change it if it wasn't exactly like you had thought. Tysm for reading it anyway though <333

Sammi129

I really loved the second chapter, it doesn’t need change at all I loved how you described different things with him not knowing what stuff was and the different way the characters act around him! I also really love the 3rd chapter as well! 
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