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Septic_111

Hello! Hello, thanks for the follow. I'm new,  I started back in December last year on writing and I was wondering about receiving some feedback on my story ethics and if I'm really any good. I'm writing a story called The Golden Mile.
          It's a story about a boy who had used writing as an escape from the harsh reality and the people around him. It is a Modern Fantasy and has a terrific character, as he is an author, but is young.
          A cast out, after his father's death. Finding hope in the events that occur. Leading him closer to the truth and his destiny. I understand if you dont have the spare time but I would really appreciate it. Thank you and remember.
          
          They're are no accidents - Master Oogway
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/185971996?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Septic_111&wp_originator=WCIQh0jhDI94WKwbR7IrEhJobRxhAtGzqKe20ck5pvtdb7fXgGFHSvkAz4GJ61oRAhcjdOPVDAm6oXkklPcNMNUZSDOU2EHWSfkhr7Zl42y9WCEIvj9guzCauzcb%2FOzu