Nardinzo
Hi, Can you please have a look on my new story?
I promise you, it will be sooo different from any long lost sister story you have ever read.
I would love to hear your review.
The update is once per week.
If you like it please vote and comment to know
https://www.wattpad.com/story/368636795?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Nardinzo
Sammmie8888
@Nardinzo I like it, sorry I’m only replying now, but it sounds good. Maybe edit the first few chapters to draw in the readers so they don’t stop reading it before they get to the good bits. Also, the grammar and spelling could improve but that’s a part of editing. Overall, it’s good. ❤️